ryry

Alas, we have been cursed to be faceless nobodies, for they have indeed vanished.

Aw, but I liked my smug crow face 🙁

@whalekeeper

A ram began to chew on his pants.

Oddly relatable. The people I’m house sitting for have goats and one of them kept nibbling at my jeans today because apparently I wasn’t feeding her fast enough.

@keilah-h

Jaylen’s character design sounds really cool! I love the four wings

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I’ll pray for you!

Wyoh, may your crush never like you back. Don’t eat this.

Wyoh, may your cheese always be warm and soft and squishy and weird.

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

🤣

I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@keilah-h

*sheathes sword and hops off of giant fire-breathing duck* Well, we may just have to torture the hosts of the site then. Maybe by playing Baby Shark 3,000,000 times in a row.

@highscribeofaetherium

Alas, we have been cursed to be faceless nobodies, for they have indeed vanished.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness hi Min!! <3 It has been awhile, I’m sorry I haven’t been very active lately 🙁 I was actually just thinking about getting on and chatting with you ❤🥰

Life is going good!! I’ve been like really happy lately and it’s great :)) Yesterday was such a great day, Easter is always so good. And I’ve gotten to spend a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Huh…I have always loved multiple POV first person books, because then you get into the head of multiple characters! But I know it can be confusing, it just never has been a problem for me because in my mind, every character has a distinct voice.

Yeah, maybe the ones I’ve read aren’t very good. I haven’t read many.

@keilah-h

XD For real!

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! I’m not sure if I’ll be able to join (I’m already so behind in my other rps! 😭) but I might eventually. I’ll probably stick around and see what happens first. It looks really fun.

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)

@keilah-h

I honestly don’t mind multiple POVs from first person, because the time I read it, each chapter was labeled with the character’s name so you knew who was speaking. But yeah, I see how it could get confusing.