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@beth-torres

Ok, thanks!

Fynn

Fynn squinted as Navin pulled out two glowing rocks from his pocket.

“Uh… d- do you want a light? But don’t shake it. It’ll explode.”

Fynn carefully grabbed it, holding it as still as possible. Though he seriously considered shaking it once or twice. “Now that the whole school’s probably been plunged into…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Glad I could help! :))

And you could totally play with his backstory like why he chooses or has to fight as a gladiator when he’s just this super nice guy

@princesachronicle22

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loopy’s idea too.…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Aww, I love that!! Siblings dynamics are the best. XD

@theducktator

That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Does just the Orb shrink, or does everything inside it shrink too?

Oh yes, very inconvenient 😑 lol

Just the Orb itself

I’m terrified that by the time I get to experience 4 feet of snow I’ll be too old to enjoy it. XD

Lol! For real XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Umm… my immediate answer would be Leon. I find him more relatable in a general sense and for some reason I just love him more. XD I wish I could give you more of a complete answer, lol. I guess I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said.

And that scene….

Girl!!! They’re smuggling Bibles together?!! I love that!! 😆

@freed_and_redeemed @stephie

Thanks!! 🥰

It was because i saw a pic of a girl riding piggyback with a guy and I was like, “I need to put this in my book!” XD

@princesachronicle22

Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.

I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari  can ma…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, ofc, to everything you said 😂

I don’t personally relate to Riker’s abuse, or Leon’s anger against God, but I do understand them.

I second Koshka’s point! That’s how I would summarize my opinion.

@freed_and_redeemed

I honestly don’t think I can answer that, lol.

For me, the two have very similarly structured POVs and voices – which is totally a stylistic thing since they are supposed to parallel each other. But that makes it harder for me to choose XD

The main difference is their internal struggles. I also can’t say I enjoy one con…[Read more]

@trailblazer @esther-c

Ok, thanks! I may check out Instagram, but I have to see 🙂

@freed_and_redeemed

🥹 Thats so sweet💖 I dont know how you make all your scenes so realistic, like, I can just see it happening.🥰

@esther-c

Well, just to clarify, the excited part was about you almost being ready to be published. 😉 I mean, driving’s exciting t…

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I had a dream last night that the pictures on kp were working again :((

@freed_and_redeemed That chapter was so sweet ❤️ I love the parallels

@freed_and_redeemed

Yesssss. She would be adorable as a part of Riker’s family tho 🥰 Then Riker/Iris will have 6 kids! XD I mean, why not?? 🤣

Um yes that sounds awesome!! That’s how big I want my family to be when I’m married. 🥰 Whenever I say it, some people give me looks, but I’m like “I know it would be crazy and that’s a lot of kids, but I…[Read more]

@theducktator

Agh! This notif got buried in my emails and I almost forgot to reply! Sorry!

That sounds really interesting! So, the Orb is like a giant bubble they are trapped in?

Pretty much. It’s kinda like a screen, so it simulates what the outside should look like, but it’s not very good. So it can start pouring rain and lighting and thu…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 Thanks! He’s a lot fun to write XD

@freed_and_redeemed

I love characters like that 🥰

thanks so much!! I have a little scene with them if you wanna see it… Though it focuses more on the MC than her.

Aww, yesss 🥺💕

@freed_and_redeemed

Yes I read that! I love her so much!! <33

I have a character in a different WIP who’s paralyzed from the waist down. She can stand, but she can’t walk. (I don’t know if that’s possible or not. I’ve only been playing around with it, I haven’t done real research yet. XD) She’s 17, so older than Lina, but she plays a huge role i…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks!! 😊

@whalekeeper

AGHHH!!! I have my own theories… but I’m either afraid to know if they’re true or hoping they’re true. XD