Loopy

@rae

Marcel

Chase trembled slightly, eyes blood red.

Marcel didn’t even blink. He fingered a bead bracelet on his arm, thoughtful. “You think about that… a lot.”

It was a statement, not a question.

@loopylin

Babs

Babs swallowed the last of her burger, and brushed the crumbs off her skirt. “…Thanks. Um, I’ll join PE with you. If I don’t fin…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yay! Dante! (Yes, you can have as many characters as you want)

@jonas

Well, I was thinking. Maybe it’s just one ghost for each character that can transform into whoever (or whatever)  they want. But I dunno really. Just putting out some ideas.

ACK, I completely forgot about this!!

@lydibug @loopylin @euodia-vision @esther-c You girls are so sweet – I love your comments and I appreciate them a lot 🥰 *hugs*

@beth-torres

I really would meet up with your charries (those two are so fun together!!) but I’m writing three POVs right now and I don’t want to fill up all the social circles, if that makes any sense 😅

@loopylin

🤣 I’m dying that was great

🤣😎 I don’t usually say this bc everyone says it lolz, but Seb controls his POV more than any other charrie…[Read more]

I should tag some ppl:

@kyronthearcaninn @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @calyhuge @euodia-vision

Feel free to ignore.
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*subscribed*

@loopylin

I’ll be praying for you guys. <3

It is so fun juggling these POVs 🤣🤣 I need to update my other charries, but I have a feeling they’ll throw me off.

@rae

Marcel

Marcel glanced up. “Huh.”

“What?”

“No one here has asked me before.” Somehow it struck him as both funny and obvious. He paused, unsure of how to start, then held up a hand for Chase to wait.

Chase watched with…[Read more]

@loopylin

Chloe

They had stepped into the shop.

Chloe smiled as Eddie pulled Ellie towards the extra small section. Chloe wondered if they’d have any trouble finding dresses small enough.

The shop was not large compared to some of the other gigantic shops.

Chloe walked close too Eddie and Ellie, looking at some of the nearby dresses.…[Read more]

@loopylin

also, if you need critiques in turn, I’m happy to give them!

@loopylin

Thank you! I did actually pause this project to work on something simpler so I could come back to this story with fresh eyes and a better idea of where to go with it, but I’d still love to hear your thoughts!

@loopylin

Lol! 😂

@rae

Marcel

“You’re right, I don’t.” Football wasn’t familiar, but Marcel had played a kind of ball game before, running up brick walls and spinning the ball into a makeshift goal. “Not good with animals, can’t play instruments.

His eyes glimmered. “I have a party trick, though.”

Marcel tilted his head. His wings, which coiled over him,…[Read more]

@savannah-grace2009 @esther-c

Aw, thanks! My mum has been busy making smoothies 🤣 I have three other siblings who got braces too, including a sensitive nine-year-old. He was so nervous about the whole thing. He likes how they look, but he eats like a monster normally and now he can’t have midnight snacks 🥺😂

My other two siblings are s…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yep that’s pretty accurate XD

@loopylin

It’s so true it hurts 😂😂😭 XD

@loopylin

That one is so funny!! 🤣

that’s how I feel, like, 70% of the time lol

@loopylin

Good idea! I’ll be praying too!

@beth-torres

Loops is right, they sound great! Nice sibling dynamic.

@loopylin @calyhuge

Ugh I just realized how many times I used “seemed” in this paragraph 🤦‍♀️

I only noticed it when you pointed it out XD

Sebastian

“To say he’s my ward, means that I keep an eye on him instead of his parents.” A fake laugh from young Angelo, which only Seb…[Read more]

@loopylin

Lol for the longest time I thought Lefse was talking about the Norwegian bread stuff and I didn’t realize it was a ship name XD

Lol! yeah, I can see how that would be confusing though…

But anyway, that scene was cute! I like them

Thanks!

@grcr

lol! Glad you like it!!

@freedomwriter76

They are so cute!! 💖💖🥰 Poor Sef!! 😭

I know &…[Read more]