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@savannah_gray2009

Okay, sure! So, something I didn’t ask for Sef but what are his like character arc themes? Does he struggle with feeling abandoned, rejected, feel like he has to take care of Self? Things like that, just so I know what kind of quotes to put.

Okay, sounds great! If you could maybe try to send the link for the photo, that might work?

It gets worse…

Jr holds all his grief up inside, thinking to grieve openly is a weakness. Eventually it turns into anger. He follows the road that his adoptive father followed, with his own twist. He vents all his anger towards his real father, Grathmere, and continues the greatest hatred for Grathmere there ever was.

@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Kid

“No, I’m afraid we haven’t met anyone named Kwin, but we’ll help you find him, I mean, if you’d like us to.” He smiled.

“Uh…no, I don’t need to find him now. I just was wondering if this was another one of his jokes, and if it was, I was going to kill him.” Kid became painfully aware his…[Read more]

@jonas

yes, you are correct

What is it with me and typos this week?…

Koshtin

“Fetch her! And you will not, I can.”

I didn’t want to make a topic for this, but wanted to write it anyways…

The sound of drums seemed to shake the very foundation of the vacation house. Nae looked innocently up the set of winding stairs that led to Jr’s room with her large, childish eyes.

“Da, why is Junior trying to bring the house down with his drums?” Nahim gathered up his…

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Okay, here is the current headache of the year…

Nahum-Alpha Slit Silvanus Thurston Dare Krogen Fives Grath

Warning, the arrangement may change later and I might add another name!

Now I shall disect his name! Each part has a meaning to his parents (he was their first child, so he got loaded on with meaning)

Nahum-from his father’s adoptive f…[Read more]

Not really a storyline, more like just points.

• Brandt saves Brenna, a slave/his Sweetheart
• Brandt’s leaders and fellows
• Brandt’s mission that he fails, falls and breaks his leg. Wounded.
• Elderly man takes him in, caring for him, not afraid to share beliefs.
• Brandt returns to fellows, overcome with guilt, pain, sorrow, depression,…

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@highscribeofaetherium ↑↑↑

It’s as a Vow, and It’s as a Rule

A little child’s first cry,

It’s little voice piercing the sky.

It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule,

That life should spring forth fresh and new.

A little toddler with feet so small,

Pads down the grass that is so tall.

It’s as a vow, and it’s as a rule,

That life should be given to you.

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@jonas

“A hero is the one who bleeds, red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.”

@highscribeofaetherium

Koshtin

Koshtin’s crooked smile faided on his lips. His eyes went pale as death, his hands had a black vapor. The black vapor became like a ring around her neck. She felt something choking her, but it couldn’t be pulled away, for her fingers passed through it, yet it still held her. Her feet floated six inches above the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

The biggest thing I noticed for critiquing was that it was kinda confusing with all the characters who was doing what. I got lost on who the soldiers were and who the slaves were in the first few paragraphs and kinda got lost on what everyone was doing whilst reading.

Yeah, I was a little worried about…[Read more]

Glace

The eyes look weird cuz I had to paste the irises in and I’ve never done that before…Any tips on how to do that better?

@savannah_grace2009

Glad you like it! Of course!

@esther-c

Chase Duke

Chase hung back as Fynn greeted a blue girl, her horse ad what guessed to be his really really close friend. I don’t belong here. He quickly pulled his hood over his face again, hoping the two girls and odd horse wouldn’t notice him. He slouched against the wall, watching as the four talked.

The horse interested him the mo…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxion

Thanks for the reply