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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h
So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
by the way you did finish the fic right?
Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!
I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yay!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
That is beautifully chilling. *applause*
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
ugh, idk what to rp. Last time Silvanis and I talked, he was criticizing my out-loud reading skills and i told him to stop talking.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@Ellette-Giselle Okay, so it’s not the first chapter yet (that’s not moving on for some reason) but I wrote the Prologue to the WIP I was talking about.
Prologue
A secret is a terrible thing.
Aliena let the door fall closed behind her with a weary thud.
“Your wife is resting, my lord. You have a beautiful son.”
The man sat down on the edge of…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
What an awesome testimony! Seeing God heal is one of my favorite things!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
It’s nice to meet you, too! I’ve been on KP for over a year, but was absent for five months or so this past year, and I haven’t been very active since I’ve returned, so there are still some people I haven’t officially met yet.
I have a story to share, if you want to hear it!
Absolutely! The whole idea for this topic came…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@smiley I love it!!! 😍😍😍 BUCKYYYYY
And I also love her dynamic with Tony 🤣🤣
@keilah-h it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raided Christian
“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”
And Thor and Loki, tho seen as “gods” aren’t actually…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Haha I forgot this topic existed and I was the one who started it! Thanks for reminding me of its existence!
I love that analogy and how you tied it together!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
HE IS SO STINKING COOL!!!
That’s slick that is!
Haha! AI murders hands!
Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.
That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )
That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You’re welcome
Which of your stories is he from?
He’s from an anthology series called the Baron Chronicles that I want to publish sometime this year if I can.
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@freed_and_redeemed
AHHHH girl I’m so proud of you!!!!
ahhh love you girl, you’re amazing <3
Congratulations!!! That’s exciting!
Ahh!! So exciting!!! CONGRATS!!! 🥳
I’m definitely not crying rn because i’m so excited that it’s finally coming out
THAT’S SO GREAT!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!
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AHHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!…[Read more]
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
AYYY That’s awesome! Congrats!!! Can’t wait to buy/read itttttt (hopefully)!!!
EEEEEE I can’t wait!!
HURRAH!…[Read more]
YAY! Congratulations! *Dumps several buckets of confetti everywhere*
@freed_and_redeemed I know I’m not on much but this came through my email and AHHHH I HAD TO COME AND SAY CONGRATS FREEDOM 😭 IM SRSLY SO HAPPY FOR YOU! And while I don’t read historical fiction I already knew I was gonna be buying ur books girl. I HAVE TO OF COURSE!!! I ALREADY HAVE KNOWN THE CHARRIES! THE BABIES!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!
@godlyfantasy12 you just made my day😭😭 THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH💜💜💜😭 And yes, they’re available on Amazon! (Freedom’s Fire is in paperback, hardback, and Ebook; Broken Shackles is only paperback and EBook) I’ll send the link in a minute 😊 and I’d love to get you a signed copy…you just gotta meet me…[Read more]
WHY DIDN’T I KNOW UR OTHER BOOK WAS PUBLISHED AHHHH WHY AM I SO FAR BEHIND IN EVERYTHING SOOOB I WOULD’VE ALREADY BOUGHT ITTTTTTTTTTT @freed_and_redeemed
Will it be available on Amazon? If not, where at? I’m a paperback girly for the most part!!!
@godlyfantasy12 there’s the link!
@freed_and_redeemed
Awesome!
@freed_and_redeemed thx! ALSO!!! U may have said this somewhere else but since idk exactly how ur running ur series…which book is the brothers in…? (MY SWEET SWEET BABIESSSSS!!! I NEEEEED MY WOLFIEEEEE AND RUEBEEEEN AND ALL MY OTHER DARLINGS)
@godlyfantasy12 haha, I get it! XD Sooo my main focus atm is Leon/Riker’s trilogy, which means all 3 novels are only Leon and Riker as POV characters.
HOWEVER, the Bois first appear in Freedom’s Fire and will also appear in Book 3 (they’re not in book 2, tho, sadly).
And I have plans for them to have their own novel eventually, it’s just more on…[Read more]
ALSO UMMM ONE DAY I WILL BE NEEDING A SIGNED COPY MAAAAAM
yoooo you’re here! how’s your writing going?
@keilah-h It’s…not really at the moment lol
lol that happens.
@savannah_grace2009 @liberty @smiley @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @theducktator @grcr Thank y’all so much😭😭💜
I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE COVER!!!
GIRL!!!!
yessss the cover is awesome.
You’re so welcome!!!!!
I’m so sorry I’m so late on this but
OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATS!!!! I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR YOU AHHHHH 🥳🥳🥳😭😭😭 SO HAPPY RNNN!!! I cannot WAIT to get Broken Shackles!!! Love you so much girl!!! <333
And someday I'll definitely have to come to one of your book signings and get a signed copy🤭
@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!
YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶