Liberty

@freedomwriter76

That works so much better! I’m excited to see what you come up with for Nano!

@elishavet-pidyon

I agree with Freedom, I think the only main thing I noticed was the characters were a bit confusing in the beginning. I didn’t know if we were looking at two of Viktor’s friends, but then I realized one was his father. Maybe change a…[Read more]

@jonas

Sure. Nahim really doesn’t have anything better to do, besides he likes Ellis.

@jonas

NAHIM

Nahim nodded and tapped his right shoulder pad where a dragon bust with a stone on the chest, and wings going out to the side. There also was a dragon picture on the right side of his chest on his breastplate. “Have you ever fought dragons? Don’t tell the magical Queen, but I fought with them, I only have head knowledge and some…[Read more]

@jonas

NAHIM

“It is made of a special crystal that with a sudden burst of energy bursts up as molten crystal. Then it hardens, naturally, glowing and really hot. If you touched this right now, you’d get an immediate burn, though,” Nahim touched the blade with his armored fingers “I’m not in much danger from one unless it gets in between the…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Welcome to KP! I’m Janessa, known around here as Trailblazer, because I enjoy hiking and mountains. I write a lot of contemporary fiction, as well as historical fic, some mystery, and some journalism. I also like photography.

A few quick questions for you:

What’s your favorite place you’ve ever been to?

Do you have any other…[Read more]

@jonas

NAHIM

“Is that thing a weapon?” Ellis motioned at Nahim’s crystal sword.

“It is. I don’t do well with guns,” Nahim patted the gun completely concealed in a custom holster on his left hip. “But swords! They are the thing I can wield.” He unhooked his sword handle and rotated a piece on it with his thumb. Immediately, molten green crystal…[Read more]

@jonas @everyone (I really never know all who to tag, sorry)

NAHIM

Another warrior in the group came and sat down next to Nahim, and extended hi hand.

“I’m Ellis, you?”

Nahim stared at him through is one-way black tinted visor. Why the hand? For a Realn to grasp the wrist of someone, was to greet or say good bye to a friend. When Nahim reached…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Greetings from Wond!

I’m a horse-crazy sci-fi, fantasy-writing homeschooler.

Questions (beware, tis the initiation on KP to be bombarded with such things)

Have you ever read Lord of the Rings? The Hobbit?

What’s your current WIP?

What’s your fantasy world called?

Who’s your favorite character to write with?

Favorite…[Read more]

Okay, completely unconnected, and I’ll disappear after this because I have never read KotLC, but…

If elves are vegetarian, why do they hunt deer in the Hobbit?

I mean, I am the person who has never seen the movies and despite not living under a rock still clings to a black haired, green eyed Legolas. I have also only read two stories from the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You’re such a good author/friend to the Queen, haha! I tend to throw my charries under the bus, lol.

Let it not be forgotten what I to my FAVORITE charrie, I destroyed his home, killed his family, almost killed him, almost killed his best friend, killed someone he knew, and made him think that a close family-friend was dead! (…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think getting almost killed by dragons is punishment enough, when time comes. And if he doesn’t face the dragons, he never goes home.

Despite what everyone here may think, the Queen has all of our characters under her little finger. If they kill her, they don’t go home, if they don’t help they don’t go home. If they…[Read more]

I did have something more devious planned but that got…

Now just so you don’t get the wrong idea of my favorite charrie, here’s a piece of him before they go to the hallway and banquet hall…

NAHIM

No one could see the expression Nahim wore under his helmet, and he was thankful for that. It was a face of sympathy, of anger, of mistrust, and of memories rolled into one. He understood her, she was…[Read more]

THE QUEEN

That was it. The warrior who had first run now had then come back now was angry at her. She rose, in all of her glory, light green  illuminated her frame. Anger rose in her face. She stretched forth her hand towards the defiant fool (sorry, I’m in character) to do to him who knows?

But a smile suddenly crossed her lips, not a devious…[Read more]

Hold on guys, the Queen shall return once I finish reading three pages!

Oh you guys! The Queen has got something planned for you, **devious laughter**

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Well, I think I’m gonna sign off for the night. I’m not sure if I’ll have much time tomorrow to RP but I’ll try to at least read through anything I miss.

@jonas

Oh goodness. Sometimes it would be nice if we could see messages pop on the screen as soon as they’re sent instead of refreshing the page.

@highscribeofaetherium

It was just Kari, Hugo, Amir, and Hedieh. The rest are still back with the queen.