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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Srkin Arlen! He’s the peacemaker type, but can be pushed to war.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
👍
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I could add Gloria…But I don’t want her seeing Glace right now. She’s a good peacemaker, but she would be bothering Glace about coming home a lot and stuff, and I don’t want to have to put him and her through that. Her being rejected by him and him having to refuse and reject her. I could add… Let’s see…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Are you going to RP?
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Lol, I do the same so much, hence my forum signature. I come on, I see something but read it wrong, then I trip over myself and hope that I can edit my already posted post before someone reads it! 😂
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ah, of course, lying. That should work 😅
No, Glace wasn’t lying. He was serious, would you want to have to trust your life to Facture? That’s a scary thought.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
And how’d your writing sprint go? (I would’ve joined you but I was busy eating dinner. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ll be praying for you!! I totally understand not having motivation. 😅 Right now, I have a lot of momentum, but about the last two months, I didn’t get much writing done because I just kept procrastinating. 😬 I wish I could give you advice, but I don’t think I really have anything expect make yourself write. XD Because that’…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Sorry @savannah_grace2009 completely missed that! I didn’t go for very long, left to design a mock cover XD but I’m cheering you on!
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Esther replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Sooo… I wanna share the first two chapters of my NaNo WIP, because, in my opinion, they turned out pretty well for a first draft. 😂 So here ya go! (Don’t mind any grammatical errors. 😁)
Chapter 1
“Amir!”
“I’m coming, Maman!” Amir’s little feet padded into the room. He jumped onto his bed and ferreted under the covers. “Story time!”
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
This should cheer Fracture up!
Glace
“I knew I needed a monologue! I knew this would happen! Now all because of lack of a monologue, I’m….normal! This explains everything!” The insane person who thought himself scary broke down and cried. Glace looked at him with the two girls, not freaked out at all. ‘Normal, really?…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ll join you if you’re still going!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Inktober Snippet Series: House of Nelindar in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
This is so sweet and sad! This is random, but I was wondering how old Marie was?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more….
Towards the end of the summer, on a Sunday afternoon, the Cullivers invited my family and the Perkins over for a picnic. George, Etta, Chester, and I went out to the barn. The horses seemed skittish, which I thought rather odd, but I didn’t see anything that would spook them.
“What’s the matte…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow, so much detail went into the backgrounds of your characters! I didn’t read it all completely but I skimmed it and it looks good!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Yes, I introduced him more recently. He’s been part of the story but I felt like he wasn’t super well developed so I’ve been trying to write more with him in this part of the plot to help develop him some more. And if I say anything else I’m afraid I’ll give spoilers so I’m gonna shut up now lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Great job! Wait, does Riker play the violin? I might’ve asked that before, I can’t remember if it was him or someone else XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m fine either way!! I would like to see more of Chester, though. I feel like you just added him in, unless I’m remembering wrong?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
The dory one XXD
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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