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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.
I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!
yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
well, I don’t think this is going to be a one-size-fits-all-easy-answer. However, I’m willing to share what I do.
so, I get said idea wether it be plot, character, or scene. From there I write it down in a special journal specifically for this purpose. Then, I pray about it. I ask God to guide me and speak through my writing. I ask…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years ago
So…
Alpha’s part was okay. Not perfect, but okay.
I’m not sure how they’d block his powers, since the only way to do that effectively is make him very tired, but Alpha has an extreme immunity to basically anything so…it’d take more than half of a vile to do that unless it was some super potion, but whatever. It doesn’t matter…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
@savannah_grace2009
@whalekeeper
@keilah-him glad we’re all on the same page now.
I agree that you can’t pin marriage to an age. Marriage comes in God’s timing. However, I believe Aaron and Sabina are ready. Yes, they share affection, and they also have been seeing each other day in and day out for a year or more! Knowing someone so well like…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.
Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
He doesn’t have an Australian accent, he just always wears an Australian army slouch hat for whatever reason.
His name is Sergeant Sam Troy, played by Christopher George. He leads a small band of three other men, who all together make up the Rat Patrol. and he’s not the only one who wears a weird hat for no apparent reason. Hitch wears…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
@keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper
ok, to start off, I am eighteen. I have already received, (or rather my dad received) a request to court me from a young man. This didn’t go anywhere for reasons I don’t feel like I needed to share. However, age has nothing to do with it.
To continue, twelve was the marrying age of medieval girls who…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
well, I have a weakness for Norse styles of music, clothing, art, ships, customs, weapons, and warfare. god of war certainly has some strong Norse leanings and so I like it a lot.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
I want to know how long it took you to draw your Marvel one. It’s just so perfect!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
I figured out who that drawing reminds me of!
This guy:
He’s from a tv show called the Rat Patrol that I used to enjoy. Can you see the resemblance?
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @princesachronicle22
Callyn
“Honestly, it makes a lot of sense now.” Evelyn slipped her hand into Callum’s.
“Yeah, but can you imagine my father’s reaction when he hears this? He’s gonna flip!”
Speaking of Silvanis flipping, would you guys mind if I experimented going a little crazier with Silvanis? The…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years ago
I think it’d be adorable if baby unicorns were called little one-horns. I have no idea why, but it just sounds kinda cute.
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Esther posted an update 2 years ago
Anyone willing to help me brainstorm my novel? Still tryna figure out the plot…
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
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Esther replied to the topic Avoiding Preachiness in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
No that actually is really helpful! I like the perspective you gave. Thank you!! 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
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Ruth replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
That’s okay.
Offer’s open if you ever want to.
Mandin and Nahim’s relationship is probably my favorite part. I enjoyed reading it a lot.
That’s good to hear! Those parts are usually the best parts to write. Of the two characters, who do you like better?
I’ll probably have the ninth chapter ready soon.
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Esther started the topic Avoiding Preachiness in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
Before I pose my question, I just want to let everyone know that this isn’t a forum topic to discuss if preachiness should exist at all in our stories or how we should present God and the Gospel through our stories. I’m simply asking what I’ll write below and don’t want to have any debates on here. Thanks guys. 🙂
I’ve recently been finding m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
look you two. I do not believe the way you do, and that’s not going to change.
I think this needs to end.
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Oh, that is cute.