Liberty

@keilah-h

So…I started reading and couldn’t stop.

I found myself really enjoying the story, and I forgot about critisims until now. My only mental note is it was pretty obvious that Spy was Huntresses and Scouts father from the point that Huntress entered his room and saw his stuff. That and sometimes it feels like the scenes are too short,…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Don’t reply to the above yet.

I’m answering you again.

@hybridlore

lol. That’s great.

So because Julian and Joseph showed empathy for Adrian in that scene… will the government think they are Christians too?

Julian’s empathy is understandable. He’s trying to stop them from killing his little brother. He would have done that no matter the crime. He reacted badly enough to what Adrian said, that h…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Augh, I keep missing you!! 😅

Cool! So… how old is Joseph in the later books, if right now he’s “Young Joseph”?

@ellette-giselle

How could you kill your FAVORITE off, Ellette??? 😢

Oh, it’s been picked back up. Just slightly bent now. 😁

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

Here is Joseph!

(Adrian was posted at the bottom of page 8 for anyone that missed that.)

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I know what you mean.

Lol yeah I totally read it and wondered, but then while I was reading this the only thing that I was thinking was that, “It’s probably the same Julian… right?” I did not even register that until right after, and then I was like 🤦‍♀️

So because Julian and Joseph showed empathy for Adrian in that sc…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Adrian was my favorite!

Oh no! I’m sorry he was your favorite! (He was my favorite too at this point.)

 

Your *not actual* book has been officially thrown across the room.

If you don’t pick it up again you’ll never know what happens…….. then I can’t be faulted for it being depressing, because you put it down right after…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel bad. I’m sorry. But then again, I’m also not. You know how that goes.

Okay, I was super stressed that you were going to find out what was going to happen because of Julian being in the RP! I’m so glad you forgot! I was thinking, “Shoot, I shouldn’t have put him in there until after this book.”

Question- how come all the other…

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@loopylin Praying!!! 🙏

@keilah-h

Thanks for sending the link!

I started reading it (just got to the part where Huntress sneaks into Spy’s room) and so far I’m really enjoying it! Thank you for letting me read it!

@ellette-giselle

It looks good. I’m still sad though.

Question- how come all the other believers haven’t been discovered, but as soon as Adrian became a believer basically, he was found out and killed?

@ellette-giselle

Not really crying—but not because I’m not sad. I just don’t really cry that much, even for some of the saddest books I’ve read. I kind of want to though.

You were so bubbly in the previous post, and now you are so sad. Part of me feels really bad, and the other part of me is wickedly gleeful.

I was half convinced you were going t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

here, this will help.

@hybridlore

Are you for real crying, or just your emojis?

I’m sorry. I know it’s sad.

You were so bubbly in the previous post, and now you are so sad. Part of me feels really bad, and the other part of me is wickedly gleeful.

@ellette-giselle

I don’t even know what to say… If you couldn’t tell I posted that before I read the new section.

I don’t even know if I want to see an Adrian aesthetic board anymore 😭😭😭

@ellette-giselle

LOL.

Oh 😂 Sorry about that. I wasn’t thinking about the POV shift at all. I guess with Adrian in so many of Joseph’s scenes, I forgot that it’s just Joseph’s POV. @Linus is probably right, you should keep it consistent.

I think you meant to tag @keilah-h up there, because those were her words.

You two have some issues with tr…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

Does anyone want to see a Joseph or Adrian aesthetic board?!?

I’m so, so sorry to all of you who loved Adrian! I loved him so much too!! He is a dear, dear character of mine and close to my heart. Believe me, I cried again, even though this is my 4th time through this draft.

But Adrian is safe and he’s home!

(And honestly, he’s only a fabrication of my imagination, if that makes you feel any…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

3rd SECTION FROM TODAY

I am on a roll!

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Another long day passed in prayer and fear. Noah and Darrien had to leave for work as normal, but this time it was much harder for Joseph to see them go, and it seemed to be the same f…

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