Liberty

@ellette-giselle

I think I’m ruining it, and it’s really nice but why is the plane flying up? It should be going down. Am I missing something?

@mineralizedwritings

Wow! The time hassle really paid for itself! That’s just epic!

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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A horse stable? MA be a war reenactment at a museum? A fair?

@rae

Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.

@theducktator That was so funny! Great job! I like the Shadow’s idea of her trying to break into a zoo and rescuing some birds, lol. Maybe an amusement park? A concert? A DMV?

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I’m not inclined to get gory. It’s basically just gonna be threats.

@whalekeeper

Okay, makes sense.

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
(I notice you use a lot of British spellings. I’m guessing that’s Canadian?…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.

I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!

yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.

@theshadow

well, I don’t think this is going to be a one-size-fits-all-easy-answer. However, I’m willing to share what I do.

so, I get said idea wether it be plot, character, or scene. From there I write it down in a special journal specifically for this purpose. Then, I pray about it. I ask God to guide me and speak through my writing. I ask…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

So…

Alpha’s part was okay. Not perfect, but okay.

I’m not sure how they’d block his powers, since the only way to do that effectively is make him very tired, but Alpha has an extreme immunity to basically anything so…it’d take more than half of a vile to do that unless it was some super potion, but whatever. It doesn’t matter…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009
@whalekeeper
@keilah-h

im glad we’re all on the same page now.
I agree that you can’t pin marriage to an age. Marriage comes in God’s timing. However, I believe Aaron and Sabina are ready. Yes, they share affection, and they also have been seeing each other day in and day out for a year or more! Knowing someone so well like…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.

Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.

@keilah-h

He doesn’t have an Australian accent, he just always wears an Australian army slouch hat for whatever reason.

His name is Sergeant Sam Troy, played by Christopher George. He leads a small band of three other men, who all together make up the Rat Patrol. and he’s not the only one who wears a weird hat for no apparent reason. Hitch wears…[Read more]

@keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

ok, to start off, I am eighteen. I have already received, (or rather my dad received) a request to court me from a young man. This didn’t go anywhere for reasons I don’t feel like I needed to share. However, age has nothing to do with it.

To continue, twelve was the marrying age of medieval girls who…[Read more]