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@savannah_grace2009

Sounds good! Hugo may try to impress her more than once though, he can be a total show off, lol!

@savannah_grace2009

Thats so good! So your thinking that she should like him, but hide it?

@grcr

Great! (Dont worry about it, your not late 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!🤣 Its always fun to write about Hugo being Hugo. Hes so funny!

@savannah_grace2009

I totally get it, Hugo can be a little… annoying.😂 It will be super fun!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh! It could be!

@grcr @minerlaizedwritings @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Aright, Hugo is going to join! Sorry if anyone characters are different from what they really would be like, its sorta hard to write them. 🙂

Hugo

Hugo trudged up a hill as the sun beat down on his back, “Where the heck am I going?” He thought, “wander awa…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

Hi! Just letting you guys know that I wont be on today, its my brothers 13 birthday and were having his party also! I cant believe how fast hes growing up (I know I sound like a mom, lol, but seriously, that’s how I feel😂) So I am really busy today, (I’m also going to ask him to join KP, since he always wants to write, but cant get motivated)…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Thank you for sharing all of those, they are so sweet!💗

@fernweh_grace

Welcome Kathryn! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food (whats the craziest you have tried?), writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen!  OK, now I’ll as…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

This will be fun!😏 😂

@whalekeeper

Awww, I love thisss!! 🥰

Oh yesss, I really need to get back into this!!

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009

😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

I love that one! It captures her personality really well. Mine never turn out that good, lol!

@smiley

Oooh, those are fun! I will try to do some!

@freedomwriter76

I will be praying for you also, I’m sorry about that, hopefully he finds work soon. If you ever need to talk about it more, feel free to tag me 🙂

@light-warrior-pen

Ooh, thats a hard question! I am not really sure what to expect so I dont think I can give any good advice 🙂 I would guess, though, it really depends on your characters as of dramatic/action packed proposal or calm/sweet one! I would also guess there would be a lot of emotion in that scene. Hope that helps!