LandriC

Ok, so life has been really busy, but I should be able to write another RP tomorrow. 🙃

@rae

Okay, awesome!! Can’t wait to read it!!! 😁

@hybridlore

No, it’s not annoying at all! I honestly am super forgetful and just forget to check KP and stuff lol. So yeah, it actually helps a lot!

I’ll probably be leaving in May, because that’s when my subscription ends. I’ll still be on other stuff but I just want to put that money towards other things, if that makes sense. 😉

@spinner4him

@jonas got it, but if you have any more, let me know! 🙂

@hybridlore

*Is trying to think of a character to use this on* *Doesn’t want to spoil anything in Healer/the sequel* XD

Oh btw I think I might call the sequel “Outlaw,” to fit the character sort of like “Healer” did. 😉

@hybridlore

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

@rae

Hey! So yeah, I love and write sci-fi, and I love this story!! You’re a very talented writer. I agree with everything hybridlore said – on the topic of long/short paragraphs, I think it’s a thing where people have…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yep, @jonas got it! XD

@freedomwriter76

It looks so good!!

The poor boiii!! 😭

@spinner4him

Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty aweso…[Read more]

@spinner4him

My favorite character to write… do you mean characters that I’ve created and am writing?

Yep! Any character of your own creation!

I love homeschooling because I have more time to invest my energy in doing things I like to do and learning about things I enjoy.

Yeah, awesome! I would agree. 😉

As for cake or ice cream, ice cream wou…

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@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, whoops. 😅

Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉

@sarafini

Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!

@sarafini

If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]

@rae

Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!

Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*

Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…

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@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

“Here,” Kari stepped closer to Ottoline and offered her her hand. “Pretend I’m the boy, and you’re the girl. The boy holds out his hand like so and asks, may I have this dance?” They both burst out laughing as Kari mocked Hugo’s deep voice. “

🤣 Thats great.

I will see if I have time to write a piece today!

@hanako

Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions &#x1f60…[Read more]

@sarafini

I have not heard of Nanowrimo, so I cant give you any advice 🙂 But thanks for inviting me!

@thearcaneaxiom

Wow, I really love this!! The concept is definitely something I could never pull off, so great job there. And the characters were completely relatable. You’re very good at conveying emotions in your writing – something I still struggle with a lot, because I don’t do it well irl either lol. Anyway, awesome job!!

@sarafini

Sara!! HI!! I missed you!🤗! How are you doing?

@aranel

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Sarah!!

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!

I wouldn’t say I’m a Tolkien geek, but I really enjoy what I’ve read by him. I’ve watched all the movies (which I know can be quite different from the books 😉 ) but I recently finished…[Read more]