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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
Yeah, magic in fantasy doesn’t bother me either, but when it gets dark it becomes a problem. Also when it becomes borderline pantheism like the force in Star Wars and that kind of stuff. This is something that bothers me in the Wheel of Time books that I’m reading right now. It gets a little iffy there with the evil magic system, but it…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
I’ve been in a writing slump lately, sorry y’all! Probably shouldn’t have done this, but I’ve started re-writing from the beginning. I moved the start back so there’s less info dumping and we get more stories about Conrad and Caleb and how Kydon and Willow ended up in the middle of nowhere. Not much writing has been getting done, but a lot of…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic New Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
That sounds really good!
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
I love it!
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KydonAndWillow and Brianne are now friends 1 year ago
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KydonAndWillow and TheArcaneAxiom are now friends 1 year ago
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@highscribefaetherium
So… The reason Conrad and Caleb sent Evander and some other people to get Willow is because they didn’t think she would come willingly. One way I wrote this before was that Kydon got a message to bring Willow too, but she was gone. This brought up the problem of if Cassius knew that both were there, why didn’t the…[Read more]
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HighScribe and KydonAndWillow are now friends 1 year, 1 month ago
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Bum Bum BUMMMMMM!
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Ended up re-writing this chapter…
Kydon woke to a rustling outside his window. His sleep-heavy eyes looked up and saw Tornado, Conrad’s falcon. The blue-gray bird had a small scroll strapped onto his foot. Kydon wrapped a blanket around his arm and put it in front of the falcon, who quickly stepped on it. He untied the black satin scroll f…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
YESSS! My sister reads agonizingly slow. I mean EVERY WORD. It drives me crazy!!
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
I am pretty proud of myself when I manage to make up names 🤣 But I love Irish and Welsh names like Elowen and Evander. Some that I thought up are Phendra and Kydon. Russian cities give me good ideas for names. Kedon and Serov (best name for a villain!) are a couple.
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
OH MY GOSH!!! I have literally mastered the art of skimming!!!!! I just got the first Wheel of Time book yesterday and I’m already 250 pages into it!!! I think there are 12 large books in the series! Yippee! I finish everything as quickly as possible so I can read, write, or play the piano!! I had no clue that other people…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
That’s so cool! I started reading the Wheel of Time series yesterday and I love it! It definitely helps to read other books to inspire writing.
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Heterochromia is really rare especially to run in a family, but hey! it’s a fantasy world. I really love how the possibilities are endless because of the fact that science doesn’t really have to have a part in it although I do love genetics and science. I’ve met someone with blue and green eyes, but no one else in the family had that.…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Mmmmm… Willow and Kydon are the only Tarnas mentioned in the first chapter. So, Savyn and Lucius Tarna are their parents, but that isn’t mentioned until this last chapter. I hope that makes sense!
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Indeed. I wasn’t going to put that much of an age gap between them originally, but the story line works better this way for Willow to remember things about her parents but not Kydon.
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