Koshka

@loopylin

You’re splitting up the twins?! *Horrified gasp*

Although, I can’t really say anything here. That is a huge plot point for my first book.

@lightoverdarkness6

That sounds wild. XD

@freedomwriter76

Would you mind/like it if Wilkins and Dáithí run into one/a group of your charies?

I was thinking maybe Ezekiel or Fin’s group, if it wasn’t a problem (although the group is pretty large, so Ezekiel may be better?).

@arien

Why did I start writing? Let me think…I don’t know. I grew up in and around books, and I guess it just naturally transferred to writing them. My siblings and I made up stories and histories for our made up play world’s, and we always intended to write them down.

Why am I still writing? I love words; how they work, how they change, and…[Read more]

@orielle21

Fun story! I liked your Bensnickle (Or however his name is spelled). Writing wise there aren’t very many things I’d tweak.

But um, do you want critique on the history side of things?

Wilkins

A headache. He sat up and rubbed his eyes, waiting for the pain to subside.

The room around him looked long deserted. Half a musty tapestry dangled from the wall, it’s other half lying forlorn on the stone floor. He shivered and wrapped his arms around his knees. Where am I? 

A castle. The shivers up his spine muntiplied down his arms,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Um wow. I can definitely see the favorite. XD

I found one new character song over Christmas break. For Daithí. (‘Justice Calls’ from Jonah by Sight and Sound.)

And a few instrumentals, but do those count?

@godlyfantasy12

Arabella has Auld Lang Syne? Is that the real song?

*Slowly faints*

Daithí MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, Daithí has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. H…[Read more]

Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than Daithí’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Bwahaha!!!

Actually, there isn’t much to worry about when it comes to Wilkins… Daithí may be another problem, but the two both need help, er, development.

Awww, no body better hurt those poor darlings!

@godlyfantasy12

I hope I got what November would say right…

The Twins

Run? The very idea! Vulkasin crossed his arms, face solemn.

Zlatan stepped back slightly to think. He ran one hand down the back of his neck, winced. “Then v’at would happen to you?”

“You…you don’t understand.” Novembré frowned and tugged at his curls. “I’m……[Read more]

@sarafini

I last mention I could find of her was on page 231, but then I don’t know where she went or with what group.

I was also skim reading so may have missed her.

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH!!! You’re back!

I can’t wait to read more about Fin, and all those other charies!

And…

I may need to add in a character in desperate need of development. You see, I wasn’t going to worry too much about him because he wasn’t in the first book. But now that’s changed (mad author laugh) and I need to figure him out. So, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

So, I’m not sure if this happens for your fire elves, but a friend of mine has an elven character that has a fire talent and I’m sort of mixing her’s with what I know of November. Anyway…

The Twins

Novembré’s breath grew heavy and his eyes went wide as the implication of their words seemed to sink in. Sparks flickered in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yep, I’m on.

I’ll RP as soon as I can.

@whalekeeper

Ah, I see. I’m not sure though, maybe they do. I haven’t come across an explanation yet, but I did see it done, just the last letter in a name.

I may need to come back to this after some study.

@godlyfantasy12

Whatever you like! I would love to hear your ideas. (Or should that be read?)

@whalekeeper

Disclaimer: I’m definitely still a student of Russian anything, and names are one of those things that are described as ‘very difficult for RSL’. Please take whatever I say with a grain of salt.

What exactly do you mean by context? Female or male? Tense in a sentence?

@lewilliams

Diminutive forms are like nicknames, only someone…[Read more]

@esther-c

That was like a Hallmark movie, only even better! XD

The candy cane fingerprint was probably the funniest thing for me.

@whalekeeper

*Tip toes in*

That’s happened to me for the past few years of church camp, and I have no idea why! Some random boy I’ve never even seen before walks up to me and asks if I have a boyfriend.

And, uh…I really don’t see why. I’m not the most friendly girl out there ( for instance, my normal resting face is very serious, almost a…[Read more]