@keilah-h
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
If you’re uncomfortable with talking about it, we’ll drop the subject. Besides, this is for the KotLC debate, people.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h BAHAHAH XD no offense taken! Nyx would actually be very proud to hear he affected Crosshair in such a way XD!!!
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
My brother likes ravens and crows because they’re really smart.
Did you or your brother ever read Jean Craighead George’s book Charlie’s Raven? I LOVE that book and it actually was an inspiration for my book.
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Arien started the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
For me, I can’t even remember why I started writing. I was bored, I guess, and I asked Mom for a piece of paper and started writing a rip-off of a Boxcar Children book. I got a few chapters in, then abandoned it. I was maybe 8 at the time. And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in…[Read more]
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Enid started the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I saw the Wingfeather strand and thought I’d make my own XD I’ve never understood why KotLC was so popular with people. I feel like Messenger just cut and pasted the elf concept from LotR – vegetarianism and all. Please, fight me. Also beware, I love fighting back.
@godlyfantasy12 and I think @keilah-h are fans, right?
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Enid replied to the topic Help. I Just Don't Get the Appeal of the Wingfeather Saga in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Kinda late here, but when I first read the books, I pictured the Ninjago snake heads too XD Looks like I had company.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @theloonyone Don’t worry, I got Milo 😉 @esther-c (Wait, Esther, are you in this group?)
Aurivis
A rope shot out from something one of the humans was holding, allowing them to climb up. Aurivis watched, mildly impressed by the contraption. The last man tried to climb the rope, but failed, sliding back down to the floor. Aurivis ch…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Milo
“If you want to continue speaking with me, come up to the roof.” Aurivis said. Why would they want to keep talking to it? It’s big!
“How about-” The others were already following the dragon. Crosshair shot a grapple to the ceiling and started climbing up it, Feather behind him. Milo watched as most of the grou…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh! Sorry I should have explained. In my story, most people live underground in mostly self sufficient communities. It’s not longer necessary, but they fear another war starting if they see people from the other side (there was a civil war like 300 years ago). Being mostly self sufficient, they still need supplies. So sometimes people…[Read more]
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Light started the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, so this is my new WIP with Asher and Iris. I’ve written 1000 words!! Lol, I know that’s not that much, but for me, it is. Please tell me what you think about it. Thank you!!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @felicity @orielle21 @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @eli…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hola! Beautiful name!!
My problem with Spanish is the opposite of yours….I have a good accent and can speak and read words but when it comes to comprehension, I get lost. I get discouraged at times. But I am going to a women’s Bible study and some of the ladies only speak Spanish so I get to exercise my listening skills then.
My…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @esther-c @keilah-h (I actually think it’s just us four in this group, I’m not sure tho)
Aurivis
“So what kind of dragon are you?’
He looked at the human who had approached him curiously. “What kind? Are there different kinds of dragons from your world?”
As he finished speaking, one of his back claws slipped on the rocky exter…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings started the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @theloonyone @loopylin @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @koshka @arien @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone! @folith-feolin
Hullo,
I have problem. My oc layson at some point in the story has this job. Idk what to call it, but it has a name. It’s a bit dangerous, it’s basically free-lance work to help bunkers that are…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic The-Bad-Guys-With-No-Name Kinda Need A Name (just a little bit) in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks, that sounds cool 🙂
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @keilah-h @loopylin (everyone still with the dragon… or is the dragon)
Milo
Milo stood frozen by the wall as half their group ran out. Several were still scattered around the room, Feather and Crosshair the only ones he knew. (A bunch of characters appeared and I don’t know where they came from xD) The dragon (is…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
I’ll tag some other KeePers to come say hi!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @keilah-h
For every one who wanted Aurivis to roar for some reason:
Aurivis
Aurivis watched more people run away with amusement. The remaining humans looked stunned and didn’t answer his question. Their little helpless faces made him laugh out loud. It was a deep, gravelly laugh that, to those…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @arien @starofthenorth @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @anyone_please!!
Hey, everybody!!
So, I wrote a short story for my grandparents for Christmas. It’s supposed to be cheesy. I need all the feedback and critique I can get, please!!! A…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok so it’s hard to keep track… but I think Milo (and Cammie?) are with the dragon rn too. (that right @theloonyone ?) Oh and feather and crosshair are there too.
Trying to help us stay organized with who is where, also because we have split the groups to make them easier to manage, maybe only tag the people your…[Read more]
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