@keilah-h
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And my other character…
Feather–A character I created. She’s sort of tall, has grayish eyes and blond hair. I’d put her in her early twenties. She was trained as a soldier along with her four sisters, so she wears clone/stormtrooper-like armor a lot (if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars films or shows, you’ll get the picture). A wood flute hangs…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Aww, that’s cute!
@Everyone else I’m going to introduce my characters now.
Rinzler–My brother actually created this character. He’s eighteen, very cocky, and he has tousled black hair and brown eyes. He looks something like this, although this isn’t actually a drawing of him. He wears a suit of this type, though.

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Yeah, now you see why I hate Rampart. (Smacks him several times also) But yeah, the hero character in this show’s case–Hunter–I could talk for miles about him. He’s just plain awesome. As are his siblings (four brothers and one sister, although one brother turns evil).
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Keilah H. replied to the topic *Ahem* functional character problems in the forum Characters 4 years, 5 months ago
@Denali-christianson You don’t have to add other skin tones etc. if, say, all of the characters in the story come from the same place. Look at how the world is separated. Yes, in America and a bunch of other places there’s mixed ethnicity all over the place, but for the longest time the light-skinned people were mostly concentrated in Europe,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@denali-christianson Trust me, he doesn’t deserve it. I mean, if he becomes a good guy later in the show (which is extremely unlikely) I’ll be like “That guy? Really?” but maybe I’ll forgive him a little. He’s just…Selfish. And he left his most loyal follower/lackey to die, and then NOT AN HOUR AFTERWARD destroyed the city the aforementioned…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@denali-christianson All righty then! Also, sad for who? Him or me?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
Is it ok if the characters on here are from fanfics–like characters I created for a specific world that wasn’t mine? Or do only original characters count?
Also, the thing about the outer ramparts…. Funny story, there’s a villain in one of my favorite TV shows whose last name is Rampart (I have no idea why), and whenever I hear the word in…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Ah, yes. Killing off a character, and then bringing them back. Happened to me. Poor Howzer, sacrificing himself to kill a villain. I’m not sure why, but I started feeling bad about killing him off and had his friend Feather pull off a crazy plan to bring him back. Which worked. Maybe that was a bad idea, because now he and two of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
@trahia-the-minstrel I don’t remember who the other one was, but yep–that was Wrecker, complaining about not blowing stuff up! And yes, I love those characters too–in my mind, it’s too hard not to…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Has a song ever inspired a story, scene, or character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 5 months ago
@elfwing Same, I have over a thousand songs in my playlist. Mostly whole soundtracks with Christian music scattered throughout.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
@madelyn Sentient just means they’re like humans, they have souls or minds.
And thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Has a song ever inspired a story, scene, or character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 5 months ago
YES.
- A whole Jurassic World fanfiction, themed after a Warriors/Survivors style, was created from a Disney song. Confused yet? It didn’t go far, but it happened.
- I’ve found that the film scores for the Transformers movies would make a nice soundtrack for the stories that my brother and I work on together. I’ve never seen and don’t really care…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
My disappointment at no fire is best summed up with a quote from a favorite TV show:
(a character) Please tell me we’re blowing something up.
(the other character) Sorry [the first one’s name], this is strictly a stealth mission.
(first character) Aaaagh, I hate that word!!
So at least we’re not going on a stealth mission rather than setting…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Hope That Remains Despite Illnesses in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
Wow, that poem sounds like a modern psalm! Like others have said, I think writing it with a specific pattern of syllables might help, but other than that I’m not a big poet, so I can’t really help much. I like it though! It’s awesome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Me idea in the forum Plotting 4 years, 5 months ago
Very interesting! I don’t think it’s cliche at all, but the fanfics I make with my brother are sometimes cliched on purpose, so I’m not sure if I’d know…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic What Kind of Writing do You Excel at? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
I write fanfiction, mostly. I’m not the best with original plots, but I make original characters and sidestory fanfics to go with them like crazy. My brother is better at creating villain groups, cool weapons, and that sort of thing than I am. But I like writing little picture books (5 published already), and I’ve done a few essays.
Also,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale Retellings in the forum Genre-Writing 4 years, 5 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Calling all bloggers! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 6 months ago
I don’t have a blog so I have no idea how to do that sort of thing…Sorry! I look forward to seeing what everyone else says, though, because I might open one someday if my books are really successful.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 6 months ago
@kathleenramm That’s hard. I’ve barely read any classics besides Narnia (which I liked) and Lord of the Rings (which I enjoyed, but I’m not super crazy about it like some people). Apart from those, the oldest stuff I’ve read has been a dystopia or two, The Raven (as an audio) and Much Ado about Nothing, which so far has been hilarious. But at th…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@koshka Cool!
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