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Elfwing replied to the topic The Daily Combined in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 haha thanks! i wanted to do it but i felt awkward only posting my own lines XD
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“Thorne, we came to talk.” Lyn called out, standing on her tiptoes, as if that would help her voice carry. A muffled reply proceeded from the back. She groaned, walking to the entrance of the other room and mot…
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ella replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 1 month ago
hahaha whales can be pretty intimidating.
I love board games! My little bro and me have a Memory rivalry (which isn’t rlly a board game).
ooo Gollum impersonation sounds like my sister!🤣🤣 that’s her favorite pastime.
archery sounds awesome! I bet you’ll be amazing! My BFF is super good at archery PLUS she is basically Jennifer…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
@joy-Caroline glad to help!! 🙂 these are honestly some of my favourite character tips lol I love these kind of characters *inwardly cries at the pain I cause them *
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 1 month ago
@kathleenramm Yes Tolkien was an amazing author! My inspiration for writing style is partly from him but less ‘fancy wording’ if you get what I mean XD simpler English.
Aww yes Colin is such a good character for a positive character arc. His character lie is big, isn’t it? I suppose he’s very relatable; he may be a brat to begin with and a…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
@joy-caroline this is right up my alley, girl! I LOVE parallel characters with different arcs!!!!!!! ❤ Keziah sounds AH-MAZE-ING! I just *internally squeals* love her already.
Like @godlyfantasy12 said, I mentioned some things corresponding to this on her “Making my antagonist likeable/believable” topic. To echo that, I’ll just cut and pas…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
@joy-caroline well I’d suggest giving moments showing her praying and asking God to help her with forgiveness, and showing her conflict with her anger and her want to obey God’s will of forgiveness. Show her earnest desire to follow God’s word I suppose; show the moments of love she gives others when she has the chance, but then her unsurity of…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 ok sounds like a good plan! 🙂
btw it is fantasy and is not an allegory any more than Lord of the Rings is. I instead strongly incorporate lessons like loyalty, honesty, and forgiveness in my stories. It doesn’t have ‘magic’ as in wizards, and witches and such things if that gives you a better idea. Some of the evil people…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
@joy-caroline As someone who generally likes antagonistic characters I like her a lot already! Kind of reminds me of Caleb Trask, one of my favorite characters in all of literature, who is supposed to symbolize Cain. I think as long as you portray all of your above ramble clearly, then you should have no problem getting your readers to like her!…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@goldyfantasy12 @keilah-h
It has no language or sexual content (that is something I’m very strict about). It’s adventures of a sister and brother and their journies growing up and crossing the lands. It doesn’t have gory violence, but there are many battles. It’s no more violent than the LoTR. I wrote it for teens.
There’s no strict deadline :)…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@elfwing Of course! I’ll let you know if I have time.
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@devastate-lasting okay all good. let me know if you want to at some later point too, if not I totally understand
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Lin replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@elfwing Hey, awesome! Right now I’m kind of busy, ahhh….
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Elfwing started the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
Hi y’all!! so, I’m looking for beta readers, as betrayed by the title.
I’m not sure if you like fantasy or not, but if you do then this is a good opportunity for it!! I do not have a strict dead-line, but I’d love some feedback by the end of the year to see if I need to make any major changes…
I’m gonna tag some people, and since I don’t know…[Read more]
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ella posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
@imwritehere1920 your website is adorable! SOOO cute! And of course, so is your bunny XD
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Hi Ella! Thanks so much visiting! Glad you like it.
Aww, thanks! We have wild bunnies in our backyard and we feed them during the summer. Sometimes, if you hold really still, and squat down low, they’ll come close enough to take their picture! 🙂 Do you have any wildlife around your house?-
That’s awesome! I love trying to take pics of wildlife (but it can be pretty frustrating bc most animals don’t appreciate it 😉) I live in the south so we get a lot of reptilian things… XD Snakes, lizards, even scorpions! Not as cute as bunnies, but still pretty interesting. XD In the mornings on my way to school I often see deer too. And…[Read more]
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Haha! My mom got a camera awhile back and has been trying to take pictures of our hummingbirds. Yeah, if only wildlife would cooperate!
We live out in the country, so we see snakes and lizards too. One four foot gopher snake just slithered by like nobody’s business, and weirdly, two quail were marching behind him …. why? Not sure 🤷…[Read more]
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That’s so cool! That’s hilarious, quail marching behind him? LOL! I know, scorpions are just… freaky. I found a dead one in our pool and I didn’t go in for about a week! XD I don’t think I’ve been able to get a pic of deer bc it’s basically “ooo, look, a deer!” and everyone’s like “where?” then I’m like “nevermind, it’s gone.” XD I will…[Read more]
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Yikes! I know, right? One time, I went to our bedroom closet, turned, and BOOM! One was sitting there on the wall! I heard a pastor refer to scorpions as sneaky. Yep. Definitely sneaky!
Haha! Yeah, it’s like that in our family. We’ll be driving along, someone sees a deer, and by then it’s gone. I hope you get that picture someday!
Cool!…[Read more]
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Oh that’s terrifying! Thanks 😉
Awesome! My favorite subject last year was geometry and this year I’m really looking forward to biology. I didn’t have a great experience in my literature class but I think this year will be great.
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ella replied to the topic I am will starke. i do indeed be him! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 1 month ago
@will_starke Those shades are dope if anything is.
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ella replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 1 month ago
Hey @akbaer ! Sorry I’m late… Welcome to KP! I am Ella and I love writing dystopian fiction, drinking tea, playing sports, and drawing flowers. And I have an irrational fear of falling into the murky river near our house. *cough* *smiles, wondering if we can still be besties* XD
Excuse me if these questions have already been asked, bu…[Read more]
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