@hybridlore
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God in Our Stories in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 11 months ago
I think someone mentioned this already earlier, but C.S. Lewis did a fantastic job using Aslan to represent God. Okay, the whole way he created Narnia and all the characters in those stories just blows my mind sometimes, but I love how Lewis chose a lion to represent God in the stories. Watching Aslan interact with the characters…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore Thanks! I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
I definitely want to try to show some more interactions between Libbie/Etta and some of the other girls from school (Lillian, Sara, Jennie, etc.). I just need to figure out what sub-plots I could work in.
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Fernweh_Grace replied to the topic Hello!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, it’s really pretty, especially in the rainy season. We’re not really remote, though I do live in a village. I live close enough to the capital city, Maseru, that I can see it off in the distance.
I had another synopsis for the prologue story… but for the life of me I cannot find it. *groans* But I found this one that I…[Read more]
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re right, there probably would be a whole bunch of emotion on both sides. 🤔 I’ll have to work that in.
I might have to try that. Thanks! 😊
@trailblazer
Good point! Unfortunately, I haven’t really shown any of her favorite things yet. I guess I should probably fix that. 😂Wow, that’s awesome you…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
This next section I’m gonna post is one that needs a little more fleshing out as well. It’s short, and you’ll be able to see it feels more like a summary than really telling the story. If you have any ideas of scenarios I could fit in here or things you think should happen with the characters, let me know!
Over…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore Here, I’ll post you some more.
The first day of school arrived at long last. I pulled out my pinafore to cover the front of my dress, and thought of how long it had been since I’d worn it. My hair was braided neatly in two braids, and I scrubbed my face clean. My shoes no longer fit me, and Mama said we’d hav…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you!
@everyone
I hope you guys all know you are more than welcome to ask for prayer request too! <3
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Smiley replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @euodia-vision @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
*Points to post above*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most
practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Here’s another segment! Not sure if I got all the historical details correct, so let me know if something seems out of place or unrealistic.
August 1883: Settling Down
After two months of travel, we were in Iowa. Three weeks after that, we arrived in Omaha, Nebraska. Here we stayed for about a week, resting from…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore I’ll keep posting more when I have time!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Has anyone else read the Dragons in Our Midst series? in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore Oooh thanks for the tag!! XD
Yes, they’re amazing! Have you read just Dragons in Our Midst, or Oracles of Fire and Children of the Bard as well? Who’s your favorite character?
Yes I love this way too much… XD My favorite character is Ashley, btw, closely followed by Bonnie. 😉 -
Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @hybridlore
Here’s my character who will be attending the party! Meet… Hugo Jim Walton. @grcr Hugo seems to be a lot like Lane, so they might be good friends! 🙂
He’s brave, bold and talkative, yet a bit annoying. 16 years old. Wears ripped jeans and graphic shirts, tennis shoes. Favorite color is g…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
I love accents too!
Just a note, I won’t be able to RP for a little while as I am still pretty busy… 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants. This is gonna be fun!
@grcr I love british accents!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants. This is gonna be fun!
@grcr I love british accents!!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace200 @esther-c @acancello @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings
Hey guys!
My character’s name is Lane Shultz.
He’s 14 years old. He’s quiet, loyal, a bit stubborn (sometimes), and he easily becomes stressed.
Lane has long brown hair, pale skin, brown eyes, and he wears a hat backwards. He usually wears a pastel-green hoodie and bla…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore
Ottoline is very excited to join the party!
She’s about 5’1 with mid length strawberry blonde hair. She was kidnapped by Pythonos as a baby and experimented on until she escaped at thirteen. So she’s very shy and has a little PTSD from being abused.
She normally wears browns, grays,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Welp… I’m writing a script… in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Alright, thanks!!
I love the example. XD 😉
Thanks for the tips!!
Those plays sound like so much fun! 😊
Thanks!!
That would be a really fun skit to see. XD
Um… I don’t think so. At least not right now. (I’ve only sort of started…. Ok, I’ve written half a line. 😂)
It’s probably mo…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @whalekeeper @acancello @grcr @anyone-else
You…and your favorite character…are invited to a party! Similar to a character castle, we’ll introduce our characters and they can interact with each other to help with character building. Also, because why not?
A side…[Read more]
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