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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello
I wish I knew EVERYONE here in real life…it’s kind of sad that we’ll probably never meet each other in person *sad face*
KP Con anyone…? 👀
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Fynn
“From Aletheia. We used to live in the District of Daemarrel, but some things happen, and now… well we don’t exactly have a permanent home at the moment.” He hadn’t quite accepted that truth until he finally spoke the words. It was true. They had no permanent place to live. “But to be honest, I don’t mind that much. I l…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Oooh, cool chapter! Love it!! And of course, love Marcurious. 😁
You wanted to critique my writing too, I think? If you want you can use the same link, or I can make you a new doc. Whichever you prefer (:
This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our s…[Read more]
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Allison and mcmuffin are now friends 11 months ago
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Allison posted an update 11 months ago
How late did everyone stay up? I made it to 2:15 ish
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I made it to 12:30 XD
ALSO…I looked at your pinterest board (Hugo’s to be exact)…AND WHO GETS IN THE HOSPITAL?!?!?-
Jean. She was captured and later hospitalized. And…. well…. the book took a shocking turn and now Vikii does die 🙁 And Jean. I feel so bad!! Hugos life will never be the same.
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ALLISON!!!! Poor Hugo!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME??? TO HIM?!?!?
okay now I have to read your book. PLEASSE post some of it so I can read it XD-
Heres when I introduce him…
The grinding grew closer and soon enough, Hugo Walton pulled to a stop beside us, flipped his board up, and skillfully caught it.
“You’re not driving?” Sam asked.
“License suspension.” Hugo shrugged, not looking one bit ashamed “No big deal.”
Sam nodded, “At least you’ll get it back, right?”
Hugo shrugged again,…[Read more]-
And when you kind of get a glimpse of his personality in the beginning
Windy Pines was an average town in the thick of an ancient pine forest. The population was just under five thousand so the town itself was smaller and more spread out. Windy Pines High was more in the urban section, whereas our houses were in a neighborhood deeper into the…[Read more]
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Oh! And this one, when you see how he can still be fun. If you want I can post more later, these are all in the beginning.
Hugo sat down next to me on the floor and we all began to talk about the week.
“You want to hear something exciting?” Sam hooted after Jean told him her command, “Ask Hugo!”
“Ok, what are you hiding?” She poked, fiddling wi…[Read more] -
Last one (You dont have to read them all, sorry I posted so many XD)
This one is told by the main character, Shauna. The blankets at the foot of my bed shifted and Sam pulled the diary out, “Keeping secrets?” He teased, flipping the pages open and leaning away from me.
I lunged for it, not worried about the so-called ‘secrets’ but more of the bit…[Read more] -
Don’t apologize! You could post a hundred snippets and I would read them all!
I love it!! Especially the last two… <333For some reason I thought Jean was Hugo's OLDER sister!! I don't know where I got that lol!
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Really??? Wow, thank you!
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@savannah_grace2009
Here one of the super sad scenes I wrote before Vikii…. Vikii dies 😭
Vikii sighed, her breath shaky, “I think I am dying.”
His face fell, I could see his world crumbling inside him. “V-vikii.. I… I…”
“Hugo stop. We’re making it too dramatic.”
“You’re making it too dramatic,” He shot back, with a laugh in the back of his thr…[Read more]-
And this one is in the hospital. And shows a bit about Hugos past.
“We’ve got to get in now!” Sam whispered, “Should we break the window?”
“With what?” I shot back, near tears.
He opened his mouth and shut it, looking crestfallen.
“Electronic touchscreen deadbolt…” Hugo muttered, turning the sparkling silver handle back and forth. He pressed…[Read more]
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@acancello
I mean…duh! You’re writing is AMAZING and if you don’t publish it I will be SUPER MAD and hunt you down and hold your charries hostage until you do!!!
Wait so are Shauna and Paxton dating? I never knew if that was the case or not.
And Hugo+Vikki….<333 IT'S SO SAD!-
Lol!! Dont worry, I’m publishing hopefully this year!
Paxton and Shauna are sorta dating. They met in Hampton and Shauna had an instant crush on him, he didnt seem to care for her at all.
Over the course of the story, you get to see how Paxton is actually a lot more calm and gentle only around her.
Near the end, Paxton (SPOILER) reveals that he…[Read more] -
ALLISON! how are you so good at coming up with plot twists?!?! I could never!
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@savannah_grace2009
Really????😅-
@acancello
YES!-
😂 💗 Its not just me, everyone on here is great at it!
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My plot twists always feel so…cliche!!
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I dont think so! I feel like they are better than mine 🙂
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Really? XD
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@savannah_grace2009
Yep!
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Lol! I started a few years ago with my Dad. When he had back problems he stopped eating it and things like chips and other junk foods. It helped him a lot and I decided that I would do the same to improve my overall health because I’m super active. I felt better after I stopped. But thats just my personal opinion, its…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have enough sugar….lol
Yeah, I used to do that too. Though after I stopped eatin…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Falon
“You seem to be lacking a dance partner. Mind if I rise to the occasion?” He gave her a gentle smile.
Falon couldn’t hide her surprise, she hadn’t expected that. She gave a warm smile and spoke softly. “I’d love to,”
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Thanks!! Yeah, I will!
So, it’s realistic. I almost said contemporary, but I think I’m going to have it take place in the 90s. Because my dad lived in New Mexico for a few years, and I believe it was during that time. So I’m going to pick his brain and try to make it as realistic as possible. I won’t put it in the same town but I m…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Hello, Humans! in the forum Start HERE 11 months ago
Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, gaming, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! Alright, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not a…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic New Year’s resolutions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@anyone
If anyones interested, I eat really healthy and have a whole bunch of recipes on my blog (Most of them are, I did make a few for my brother)
acancello.blogspot.com
And if you are interested, I can post more 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Apparently I had already made that exact post before so I had to add an extra emoji XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
😭😭😭
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
I’m so sorry about that, thats rough. Ill be praying <3
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Allison replied to the topic New Year’s resolutions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Happy New year!! Those are great goals!
Some of my resolutions are….
- Learn to drive
- Publish my novel
- Learn to think before I speak (I do that most of the time, but I usually have the perfect comeback…)
Thats all I can think of now, Ill post more later!
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
This is one of the saddest parallels ever!!!!
and it’s hard to think of Fin in that light, poor boy
also reading this I was reminded of the scene in Blackwidow where Yelena tells Melina that the girls being brainwashed was her
it’s like those sudden realization moments that really grip people
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Of course!
Easton
At least Hallie was enjoying herself. Not that he wasn’t, he just didn’t find dancing the most exciting thing in the world. Besides, everyone seemed to have found a partner. He didn’t mind sitting out.
But apparently he wasn’t the only one sitting out. A young woman with brown hair leaned against the wall, only a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @hybridlore @rae @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-sorry-I-can’t-think-XD
Ok, I am so excited to officially introduce these characters!! They are pretty well developed, but their story is still in the works. 😂 I love their brother-sister dynamic so much and I just love them so much 😁 Here t…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Thanks😊
Falon
Falon gave a smile to Ev and then turned away, looking for a new dance partner, she quickly glanced back at Ev and when she did a painful sting went through her. He was dancing with some random girl like they had been in live for years, the chemistry was obvious and Falon began to wonder if she was the problem.
Was…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Sorry for taking so terribly long to reply (I find my mood for wanting to RP changes a lot XD)
You’re fine, I totally get it. XD
I’ve also been in terrible writer’s block, where writing almost feels tiring and hard (I still don’t know why)
Ugh, that’s annoying. I wish I could offer advice, but normally the only reason I don’t write is be…[Read more]
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