Jean Coul

@hallie-jean

Thank you, Hallie!! 🙂

@hallie-jean

Awwww, THANK YOU for being so willing to read/critique it!!! Your feedback is super helpful!!! My chapters tend to be pretty long, so take your time! 🙂 Wow, really? Awesome! *high-fives* FIRST-TIME NOVELISTS CLUB! Thanks for wanting to read it! 😀

@Abigail-m

Thank you, Abigail!!! That means sooo much that you love him as much as I do!! 🙂 He’s my favorite character I’ve ever made and I fangirl over him wayyy too hard, so I try to build his character as perfect as I can. And he has the most drastic character/redemption arc of anyone in the story, so that’s exciting! 😀

@Gracie-j

Thanks! 🙂 I know, he captured my heart .5 seconds after I made him XD Yup, I may try that with the raven! Newton had his raven before Caira had her owl (she used to have an arctic fox), but when I switched it, I realized they both had birds 😀 Oh well.

@ribbonash

Aww, thank you for offering to read it! It’s my first novel (and first chapters) so I still have a long way to go, but I’d love any feedback you have! Here’s my first chapter 🙂 Thank you so much!!

@Gracie-j

THANK YOU, GIRL!! 🙂 And yes, I did plan on having a divider between them to smooth out the transitions (that must’ve slipped my mind). And *sheepish grin* I have a habit of ‘telling-not-showing” so thank you for reminding me! *flees to Google Docs to edit*

Yay!! Girl, that’s AWESOME!! I’m so happy that you’ve fangirled over them :D…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

That is so good!! I just LOVE Newton! There are literally only three characters in all existence (and in my whole life) that I’ve ever fangirled about and Newton is so definitely one of them!! (the rarely seen fangirl side of me is internally screaming right now). 😀 😀 😀

@nova21

It was my pleasure! 🙂

@gracie-j

Personally, I’ve never had to use the Cast of Characters list (The Snow Warrior only has five immediate characters), but I think “reoccurring cast” lists are excellent:) In fact, I kind of wish I had enough characters to make a cast list.
As for the spoilers aspect; spoilers have never really bothered me (except in mysteries of…[Read more]

@hallie-jean

Everett is such an amazing name! I like him already:)
(And actually, I LOVE spoilers! Yes, I’m probably weird but I’m the girl who looks up how a movie ends scene by scene before actually watching it XD ).
And Molly’s collage is awesome! 😀

@gracie-j

Thank you!! 🙂 Yeah, I’ve already been in love with him for a loooong time XD He still looks slightly younger than how I think of him, but that’s fine. I thought about including his raven, too (I don’t think I’ve mentioned that Newton carries a raven around on his shoulder) but didn’t have the room…

@issawriter7

YAY!!! Thank you, Issa!! Your feedback is SO HELPFUL and SUPER SUPPORTIVE!! 🙂

I’m really glad you like Deek!! *whispers* If I’m being honest, I’m starting to love him more every time I write him! But don’t tell him that, ’cause he’d probably kill me XD

WOOHOO! I’m super happy to hear that the mystery/suspense is good! I tried to…[Read more]

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @e-k-seaver, @daisy-torres, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @writerlexi1216, @jenwriter17, @godlyfantasy12, @hallie-jean, @ribbonash, @wyn-rose

Hey everyone!!  I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]

@joy-caroline Yay, another Faouzia fan! *high fives* My favorite song of Faouzia’s is “Tears of Gold” right now, but I also really love “You Don’t Even Know Me”!

So this is one of my first attempts at sketching Newton. It’s about 90% accurate to how he looks in my head, but *shrug* this is just a first try. The poor boy needs a haircut, but he is homeless, so his appearance is a little rough. Tell me what y’all think! 🙂

@hallie-jean

Hi! A pleasure to make your acquaintance, as well. My favorite punctuation mark would probably be either this , or ?. I like the way commas look but I also enjoy question marks!

My upcoming WIP is about a girl whose homeland gets invaded, so she has to get involved with a long war in order to win it back.

My favorite fictional…[Read more]

By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…

@jenwriter17 @kayleigh-idea @ribbonash @wyn-rose @daisy-torres @mkfairygirl @godlyfantasy12

@devastate-lasting

Thank you so much! 🙂 I may need it… lol