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Active 5 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Pete though. Pete hurt.
Wait Pete doesn’t die? Pete like Artham? Am I forgetting something lol 😭?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper Does Seb have anything in his pockets? Dante definitely tried to pickpocket him for fun while grabbing the hat and you can decide if he noticed. :]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper ok @rae everything’s the same except it was the brunette who chased Chase and then Gregory came out to see what the commotion was about.
People
At Mr. Gregory’s command, the brunette teacher ran to tell the nurse what happened. The kids crowded around their injured companion in morbid curiosity.
“Give ‘im some space,” Gregory…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Wyoh, what the heck dude
@rae @whalekeeper
Ok, I’m sorry I know I just said I’m fine with people writing Mr. Gregory, but I think he’s smart enough to not run after or physically grab Chase since he’s obviously very anxious and acting like a rabbit in a trap right now.
So would it be alright if I rewrote that scene so that the lady chased…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@anyone-who-cares-idk
some quotes of Jaylen’s (mostly insulting people lol)
(upon defeating her friend whose helmet always slips in front of his eyes) How do you even see outta that thing, Jan?
(dodging Mundy’s sniper shots) Missed me! Missed me! Now you gotta–Y’know what, I’m actually not gonna finish that.
(watching a retreating enemy)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?
also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae oh ok! All the ideas you’ve told us so far are really interesting though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
How does your alien manage to be socially appealing and completely clueless at the same time? XD
lol I think this is the first time Dante has even set foot inside a school so he is very clueless about certain things. I considered making him illiterate one time but decided his sister probably wouldn’t allow that
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
And once again Whaley shows off her amazing psychic powers! ✨
XD You read my mind again. I already had a bit written where he gave them all cleaning and kitchen duty and made some of them miss the dance, but I like how you wrote it more.
And you’re totally fine writing Gregory. He’s just a side character I don’t care too much…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
idk I have too many characters in one room help
“Well.” Gregory raised his eyebrows in slight surprise. “That was not on the list of reasons I have you here, but I very much appreciate the honesty.”
Ellie crossed her arms and gave Seb an indignant look. “I act entirely on my own free will, thankyouverymuch.”
“So you all helpe…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Hunter
Mayfly splashed Silvanis again.
Not that he didn’t deserve it for being such a grump.
Then she spelled twelve letters in the air, six for her and six for him. She then intertwined her fingers.
“Together? Two of us?” Jaylen guessed next to Hunter. “Or no, that looks too long for that word she’s making. Assuming her writing system…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
😊 How’s life been?
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 5 months ago
Ok, it sounds awesome! I might try it next year, but I might not be able to fit it into my schedule since my schoolwork this coming school year is more than last year. If I tried it, I think it’d be sort of a way of feeling out if I want to seriously consider the Author Conservatory as a college option. (I know they’re dif…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
And I’m glad you like the idea!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
That was actually my original idea… 😏 I might try it. I definitely agree that it could be really powerful.
We’ll see where the story takes me I guess. I’ll probably try writing it sometime soon. Maybe next month? Although I’m gonna be working on a different WIP over the summer. The plot takes place during the school year, b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey!! Good to see you again!
Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin cool!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 5 months ago
@trailblazer Ooh yes those are so good!!
@keilah-h Thanks! Same here, lol. I haven’t been on the Reb in a while but I believe my next article should be up on the 26th.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome!
oh and that article is awesome. Makes me wonder if I’ve gone too far in some recently picked up obsessions, but TBH that’s how I always feel when I read articles about pacing yourself and having a filter on your media, so don’t feel at fault for messing me up. If anything, I probably needed it, and am now…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae what’s wrong with cryptid stories? Not that I’m defending them. I don’t even know what they are besides stories of someone looking for a mysterious animal.
Maybe don’t look them up if you find so much dark stuff, and write the story a different way, looking at something else for inspiration. “Adventurer/journalist discovers a scary,…[Read more]
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