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@elfwing could I get some more details?

what the book is about and what it contains (language or violence or things to be aware of), how we’d contact and when you’d need everything. (Also how it all works because I’ve never been a beta reader before, but I’m kinda interested. Obviously I’d have to run it by my parents first)

@gracie-j Thank you! As for his POV, no, and that’s some of the issue. How do I get enough of his backstory across thru dialogue and others insight without info dumping and being overly obvious? But thanks glad everything sounds good)

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I’ve got a new blog post up!!

@joy-caroline (WARNING LONG POST LOL) @mkfairygirl (Thought u might be interested in this too!)

Sorry it took so long to get back with you on this subject!!!!! I asked my dad to give me some notes and scripture to help me share the difference between the Gift of Tongues and the Evidence of Tongues, and it took a while to get them, so thanks for…[Read more]

If I did this I think I’d release the story as a series of shorts. (That way it wouldn’t be one long arduous process, but one that I’ll be making progress with and still get the story across)

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@joy-caroline thank you so much!!! Ahhh glad u like it! It is the first draft so that gives me hope that it will get better lol!!

Wait so we can share our other POV character’s first lines? I’m in!

This is November’s

“Ara?”

“You okay?” (Omit) “Why are you barefoot?”

”Sounds like fun!”

and Jocelyn’s

“Hello one and all!”

”Ready boy?” (Omit) “Well then, let’s give them a show they won’t forget!

“Sorry!”

@elfwing

“Thorne, we came to talk.” Lyn called out, standing on her tiptoes, as if that would help her voice carry. A muffled reply proceeded from the back. She groaned, walking to the entrance of the other room and motioning for the others to follow, which they did.

November glanced back once more at the knife sticking from the wood.

As the two…

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@faith-q honestly I’m not a great artist, but the others have given good advice. There’s also a website (and a free version) called Inkarnate and it is awesome, but I still have yet to make a map Of Cirque and A’Grend I’m really proud of.

Sharing scenes on here actually make me realize they aren’t quite as horrid as I originally thought 🤣

If you wanna know what happens next I don’t mind sharing just let me know lol

I know it’s super long and not the best (first draft!! Lol!) but hey i still like it all things considered. Then again November is like…one of if not my fav character soooo

@keilah-h I write fantasy!! Tho I’m still in my first draft there’s one scene I sorta like (at least the idea of it) that’s a bit Action-y

(Tho it begins at the end of one POV Chapter and finishes in another)

Arabella’s POV

“She said to take care of you myself.”

“She?” Ara whispered, wondering what he meant. But Arabella didn’t have tim…

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@nova21 AHHH I LOVE THIS!!

Okay, since my book actually starts off with a prologue from the antagonist’s POV, I’m gonna put her first three lines and my MC’s (That takes place in Chapter 1 at a totally different place and time)

Corvina-

“Master? (Omit) Master?”

“Yes Master.”

“Ah!”

(Yea….lol. There’s a lot more inner dialogue then actual…[Read more]

@daisy-torres honestly ur thing about ppl turning to vegetables reminds me of the rocky and bullwinkle movie

😂