@godlyfantasy12
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
XD Lynn is great; I love her. XD
Viktor
“Hay, Vick.”
What had that blonde girl called him? Because he had to assume she meant him.
Not that he minded nicknames, but he just liked to know to whom a sentence was directed. And why Vick? He’d been called many names in his life, Little Screamer, Ami, Young Mynclais, and the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! I love it too!
I think they need to meet each other, then learn who Ocran is, than we can have the ‘battle’. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Zlatan
“Good. Ve need to move.”
He turned, searching for the group.
Here was Vulkasin, gazing longingly at the stone wall. There’s Arabella, looking to the stars.
And Novembré standing stock still, wide eyed and open faced.
The brothers shared a look.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hi!!! Being a bit late is fine. Or at least I hope so, since I’ve been know to be a little tardy at my responses. 😉
Viktor
The world had grown soft with the night. Seas of stars rolled over head, and tender leaves beneath. Viktor tipped back his head and let the song of the heavens fill his soul.
“Praise the Lord of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @anyone-else @sunny421
Hello! I have returned! (After lurking about here silently enjoying everyone’s spoilers) I love them all, especially November and Corvina’s.
Now I mean to tell mine own.
*Deep breath*
OKAY Y’ALL, I HAVE TO TELL THIS!!
VIKTOR AND THE SIBLINGS HAVE A FIRST COUSIN!!! For now he will…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.
Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.
Vulkasin
A cool breeze welcomed them to the outdoors. Glorious, wonderful free air. No low ceilings or hanging rafters to bash out ones head off. The lady shone in the heavens,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?
By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?
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Koshka replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.
Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @joy-caroline
@anyone-else-that-is-interested.
Okay, so I have started the rough draft for the first book in my Kingdom of Shadows series. (The one with Alwin and the rest) I do need help on the editing, but since it’s rough draft I’d just mostly like to hear all y’all’s thoughts on it.
By the way, untill I wrote it, I’d…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 (Wow! The world grows smaller every day. It was soooo good. I hope they were exceedingly blessed!) @emilysf @koshka
Finally, here it is!!
Viktor
The rest of the group wasn’t following. Or at least, not quickly, and not completely. Viktor gritted his teeth and darted a glance behind him.
He saw a nightmare.
His nightmare all…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
What?! Really?!
The one at Lufkin?
I don’t know if I can ask for names, but that’s awesome.
I had a response written, but it just got obliterated, so I shall to rewrite it in the next few minutes.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
….and that was NOT one or two hours…and it’ll be a little longer till I get it in, but not as long as that was. 😂😬
Actually…
Yes! I’m at the Texas District Youth Camp. *Whoop*
It’s the last day though.
*Sniff*
But it’s been amazing!!!!!
(Hallelujah!)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Yes! I’m sorry it’s been a while. I’m at church camp, and haven’t had much time or energy left for the forum.
However, I’ll get something up in the next hour or two.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I don’t know any real-world person with DID, nor do I know any characters, but having SPD (sensory processing) myself, I can sorta sympathize with characters who have inner issues. While I don’t consider my condition to be hindering at all, I can see why Corvina’s really would be. I would just suggest research, like everyone else.…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I mean, I don’t know much about psychology but from my understanding DID can often start due to trauma, for example, if someone as a child is being abused they might imagine whatever is happening to them is happening to someone else, therefore creating another personality as they mature. Other than that, I know nothing, and I would…[Read more]
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Starshiness started the topic Packing Punches! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
One of the things I love most about writing is that while a good author has a multitude of words available to him, he has the ability to condense what he wants to say into a few words or sentences–but just those few can really pack a punch! Flash fiction is to me one of the most intriguing genres; and I love to geek out over even more condensed…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I think your characters are so cool! I want to hear more about them! (I can see why November’s your good boy. I feel that way sometimes ABOUT CHARACTERS I DIDN’T EVEN CREATE BUT HAVE THE TENDENCY TO TORTURE IN MY FANFICS….WHY???) And two of your characters are siblings, and don’t even know it???!! That’s awesome!
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EmilySF replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
sorry, been a busy and mostly only had time for reading, reading, and more reading.
I don’t think I have any questions, but I do maybe have some advice for your question.
Could you have Brenven be an energetic, fiery child and there’s some sort of prophecy or promise woven around him that she finds out, and due to those two…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I can’t hold them in. *Sigh* maybe a few won’t hurt the system.
What are November’s uncontrollable powers?
How did he escape being killed?
Who exactly is his father?
About how old are these characters when the explosion comes?
Did Eder know?
What color eyes does Corvina have? (Sorry if you already said somewhere and I just…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I. Did. Not. See. That. Coming.
Wow. No wonder his father is so awful…wait. is he really his Dad? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
This will definitely stay here!
And now so many questions are piling up in my head that I’d better not start asking any more. The forum may not be able to take it. XD
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