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@godlyfantasy12

This guy sounds fascinating!  His backstory is awesome, and he sounds like a genuine character.  For likeability, you could:

1)  Give the MC and Ridley something in common (a hobby, a genre of music, a favorite food, etc)

2)  like @elfwing said, moments of vulnerability.  That would make the reader open up to him really fast…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Ah, sorry I never responded to this! *facepalms* My schedule is so busy lately and I forget everything so my apologies. :O Yes, that music is a.m.a.z.i.n.g. and I appreciate you sharing it!! It will be super helpful for my upcoming scenes!! 😀 Thank you! Oh yes, Religion is such a great class! Yup, I’m also taking American h…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Eyyy, that’s amazing, girl! *claps* Way to go! Ah, Crazy Writing Week sounds fun. If my schedule wasn’t about to get more busy, I’d definitely join you. XD. Ah, that’s totally a mood : Hey, hopefully inspiration will strike soon! That’s really great, good luck with everything! 🙂

@joy-caroline

*gasps* A prequel? That’s so…[Read more]

@lewilliams @issawriter7 @scripter-of-kingdoms @mkfairygirl @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @godlyfantasy12 @gracie-j @abigail-m

*pokes head back into Kingdom Pen and squints* It’s been a while since I’ve been here, hm? How are all of y’all doing? How’s life going? For me, I’ve been outlining the second book of my LoHK series (which has…[Read more]

@keilah-h

This is a great drawing. I love how it’s a social commentary on the state of current society. People nowadays wear a flashy, flamboyant demeanor (which you depicted as the colorful clothing), but deep down inside, everyone is just dull and empty on the inside (and you used the gray face to represent that).

I spent a few hours pondering…[Read more]

@will_starke

YOOOO, wassup pal?! Glad to have you back, man. @gracie-j has been looking everywhere for you.

I srsly thought you got trapped in a cheeto factory. Those things are impossible to get out of…

Don’t you think that was a lil rude to @devastate-lasting? I mean, pineapple on pizza isn’t thaaat bad y’know?

@devastate-lasting oh, so…[Read more]

@abigail-m

*gasps* YAY, you posted it!!!!!!!! Girl, I’m totally going to read this whenever I have the time, thank you so much for sharing it!!!!! Eeeek, I can’t wait!!! (Also sorry if I can’t get to it right away–today is going to be quite busy for me but I’ll try to read it once I have some free time!:)

@godlyfantasy12

If you have the resources, go for it!  No regrets! 😉  If it totally flunks, don’t sweat it.  If it turns out to be the best choice you could have made, yay you! <33 (I think a yt channel would work well for that)

@joy-caroline

Awesome topic, I LOVE this kinda stuff!

Hmmm….  *ponders over which best most devastating character lie to use*

Enter Dylan.  He believes he can’t be loved.  He wasn’t loved or appreciated by his father as a boy, and then he witnessed his mother’s death, which scarred him.  He put all his worth into MMA fighting but didn’t thi…[Read more]

@abigail-m

I’ll check it out!

@godlyfantasy12

Girl, GO FOR IT!!! An animated short sounds like the coolest thing ever and you can totally do it! I think it’s def a cool idea and I support ya all the way! 😉

@e-k-seaver

That’s so cool, I had no idea either! 😀

XD I think I should!

@writerlexi1216 @gracie-j @joy-caroline @issawriter7 @kathleenramm @erinramm @godlyfantasy12 @daisytorres @elfwing @mkfairygirl @seek-justice @jody-maile @lydia-s @lewilliams @nova21 @scripter-of-kingdoms @nanisnook @e-k-seaver @libby @devastate-lasting @jenwriter17 @andeveryoneelsethatmystaying-up-till-midnight-each-nightheadcan’trecallthismoment:)

@nova21 @devastate-lasting @daisy-torres @lewilliams @elfwing @joy-caroline

Oh my goodness, all of you have been so sweet and super helpful!!! Thank y’all so much for the advice, it’s really helped me figure out the next steps to overcoming burnout and I feel SO much better now. *sighs of relief* Thank you guys so much, you’re the best! I’ve…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Ahhh!  I’m at chapter seventeen and I just can’t stop!  This book is well-written, intriguing, and TOTALLY PUBLISHABLE!  Make it happen, Emily.  This needs to be published.

I just can’t stop thinking about how amazing this is!  I don’t know how many times I’ve laughed out loud…  (and I seriously almost cried once!)  And the chara…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Got it!  So excited, I’ll check it out later today.