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@gracie-j

Ah, I get you on 1# 100% I’ve actually never read a romance novel before, (the subplots are usually good enough for me:) but I agree with you that I’d like the guy over the girl in that type of story.
I know what you mean about shallow and underdeveloped characters as well. I mean even in novels that are not romance, I come across more…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Sure! I can’t always promise I’ll be one, but I’d be grateful if you tagged me:)

@writerlexi1216

I think Anton would think that’s an excellent idea! He’s never had coffee before either, I believe he and Caira would get along really well:)
Are you kidding? That was just about the greatest/most hilarious excerpt I’ve ever read! There’s no way I could forget that one:) Haha, plus I’ve love those two’s dynamics, even in the…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Awww, THANK YOU girl!!! <33333 I’m so happy you love them!!! They’re my favorite couple for certain 😉 (For a while, I gave Deek a “girlfriend” and thought they might be my favorite couple, but that didn’t happen XD) I haven’t written many romances in the past, so I’m very thankful that I have such wonderful advice to help me…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@abigail-m

Oh, that’s okay!!! I’m always super nervous to edit posts, because usually they vanish. I actually posted the above post twice because it disappeared, so I’m sorry if it duplicated!! 🙁 And that makes total sense:) Thank you!!:D Also, in response to your next post, THANK YOU!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 I’m going to try to work on them even more…[Read more]

@gracie-j

YOU TAGGED THE RIGHT GIRL!!! YAY!!! *cough cough* All right, I’m sure it was inevitable that I would come here straightaway, but honestly? I’ve gotten to love writing romance so I can’t help it:) So I don’t have any specific questions, per say, though I was going to describe what I had outlined for my main pairing (Newton & Caira) and…[Read more]

@abigail-m

*grins* I’m glad Anton enjoyed the hot chocolate! Caira should visit Birch Woods sometime and let him try coffee–I’m sure the two of them would have an interesting chat over a cup of coffee XD Thank you!! I thought it fit both Deek and Newton’s characters to have that brotherly relationship, because neither of them ever had a brother…[Read more]

@abigail-

*grins* I’m glad Anton enjoyed the hot chocolate! Caira should visit Birch Woods sometime and let him try coffee–I’m sure the two of them would have an interesting chat over a cup of coffee XD Thank you!! I thought it fit both Deek and Newton’s characters to have that brotherly relationship, because neither of them ever had a brother a…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

Thank you! I’ll hopefully start writing between six and ten a.m. Central. But I’m not sure if anyone else writes at those times, if so, I’d be happy to join:)

Congratulations everyone!!! I’m hoping to join you all this week since I’m moving my writing schedule up to more early morning:) Again, fantastic job:D

@scoutfinch180

I agree with you 100% 🙂

@gracie-j

Technically this is for the discussion of the week topic, but I decided to move it hear:)
So actually, I’ve been meaning to ask you for a bit now. What is it you specifically dislike about heroines? I really hope that doesn’t sound rude or anything, but the reason I’m asking is that while I notice a lot of irritating traits in heroines…[Read more]