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@mineralizedwritings

OOOOO I like him where’d his glasses go, did he misplace them?

@awsumfaith

No worries! Is it okay if I get back to you with the critiques tomorrow? We’re about to start Passover over here and I don’t have enough time to type out my response.

HMMM

Plot twists, eh? XD *is enjoying this waaaaaay too much*

Okay, I have a list that includes moments from different stories (Insert Title and [SPY]DER-MAN which by the way you don’t need to have known about or watched/read the movies or comics to read, I’ll reference some things but I’m making up the characters, plot, etc.), but feel free to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh girl. Thank you for this. I…did not know I needed this reminder. Thanks.

XD y’ALL aNd yOuR eXpReSsIve wRiTiNg aRe mAkInG mE eMoTiOnAl aGaIn

*standing ovation* *well not standing but I would be if I could be*

This…is amazing. It fits the song so well (yes I heard it XD I REALLY REALLY LIKE the music XD I like all the music for…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

OOOO I love the sketchiness of the lines. I think Finnegan is my favorite of the two, but I really like the way you did Helena’s hands.

@godlyfantasy12
Haha! I knew it! XD I love that character so much.

@esther-c
I really like the lettering! The people. XD Abraham Lincoln is my favorite.

@kyronthearcanin

OOOO I like them all! =D

@awsumfaith

Oooo I like her! And yay for siblings. =D

Since you’re doing your protagonist I guess I’ll pick one of mine. XD
I don’t want to overload people with information so I’m just gonna copy what you shared about your character and do that about mine…

Teilo O’Muirynn *insert last adoptive last name* He is the MC, I’m 99% sure……[Read more]

@awsumfaith

I’d love to hear about you characters! =D

XD I have a lot of characters of my own so I may not share all of them but I’m definitely willing to share some if you want.

@esther-c

Oh, I hope you feel better soon!! 😊

Thanks =)

Hm… the handcuffs… Well… maybe that was just me somehow forgetting he was wearing them. 🤣 Yep, that was totally me forgetting. I’ll have to fix that. 😂

XD I’ve done that before too. Like a character was wearing a hat but they were running and it was windy and somehow it magically manages…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AWW okay so I really like both snippets

…Peter needs to have someone with him 24/7. Just…yeah. *facepalm because no one was watching him and he’s only six*

Great job! =D

@joy-calle

Oh no. XD *memories of hearing siri tell me a story*

No, I haven’t done that yet. XD But I might have to now…if only for laughter.

@godlyfantasy12

OOOO I like it! =D

I have one question though, who is the blond guy in the top left corner? WAIT WAIT WAIT is that Arthur???

@keilah-h Oooo I really like the way you did the camo!

@power I reeeeaally like his armor, and the shading as others have mentioned.

@awsumfaith OOOOO I like how clean your lines are! Arwen looks nice. ALSO THE PATTERN ONE IS AMAZING, HOW DID YOU NOT SMUDGE THAT.

@loopylin

XD what happens if you’re both authors at the same time??? XD

@freedomwriter76

No worries! =D Great job!

…does he…get a decent ending?

@esther-c

Sorry I missed this! also my thoughts may be kinda jumbled I’m sick and brain is kinda fuzzy

I like the pacing! =D

I agree with Min, you do a lot of telling and don’t show things very much. It’s not bad to tell, there is a place for it. I’m not gonna elaborate more on that since my brain isn’t working and Min already gave you an…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

@orielle21

Cool! sorry for the late response, I tried to respond to you yesterday but internet didn’t want to work