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February 24, 2023 at 6:15 pm #134498
@freedomwriter76
Lol, arenāt they the best!?!?!?!? ????
Absolutely! XD The moment a sibling relationship is introduced in a book or movie and they’re not fighting the entire time I’m immediately interested. XD
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19March 25, 2023 at 6:01 pm #138422Anonymous
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I (finally) have more chapters for y’all!!!! ???
Here we go!!!!! š
Chapter 34
The flames of the campfire lapped up, and talk, laugh, and giggles sounded.
They had gone hikingā¦they had explored the entire campground and even tried fishingā¦and they had all had dinner over a campfire, the first time almost all of them had done so.
Thor and Loki had gone camping many times and loved it with their whole hearts, it seemed.
Not that Tony didnāt like itā¦he didā¦it justā¦brought up memories.
Tony kept his hands on his lap, slowly clenching and unclenching his fists, trying to ease the tension he felt throughout his body.
He had never gone camping muchā¦but he had gone onceā¦a long time agoā¦long before he had become an orphan.
Tony took in and let out a deep breath, just as footsteps sounded.
Maria held up a bag of marshmallows and two boxes. āItās sāmores time.ā
āAre sāmores yummyā¦?ā Peter asked, eyebrows furrowing together in curiosity, sitting on the log beside Tony.
āThey are absolutely delicious! A fire roasted marshmallow and chocolate in between two graham crackers, oh, Peter, it is pure perfection!ā Thor replied with a big smile.
āChocolate AND marshmallow!?ā Pietro cried, eyes going wide.
Wanda smiled shyly. āā¦I donāt know if weāve had one of those either.ā
Nick raised an eyebrow, before looking around at all of the kids around the campfire. āHave any of you had a sāmore before?ā
Tony raised his hand, as did Sam and Bucky. But no one else raised a hand.
āWhat!? Well then, that ends tonight!ā Loki cried. āWe shall make sure all of you eat a sāmore!ā
They made sāmores as quickly as possibleā¦a couple marshmallows fell into the fire, but everyone got one.
Peter stared wide-eyed at his. āCan I eat it now!?ā
Phil laughed, smiled, and nodded. āOf course. Dig in!ā
Tony bit into his.
Heād only ever had a sāmore once, the one time he went camping, and this one tasted even more delicious than he had remembered.
He savored the tasteā¦and glanced over at Peter, curious to see the first graderās reaction.
Peterās eyes widened even more, and he screamed, āItās so yummy!!!ā
He quickly gobbled his down and suddenly giggled. āHa-haā¦Iām sticky!ā He cried, melted marshmallow and chocolate all over his cheeks, lips, and hands.
Tony laughed. He looked like he had been attacked by a sāmore, not eaten a sāmore.
āIām gonna get you sticky, Tony!ā Peter cried, rushing at Tony.
āHey, hey! No! No getting me sticky!ā Tony yelled, running away, both not wanting to be sticky and wanting to make Peter laugh.
Peter giggled, just as Phil grabbed him from behind with a laugh. āAlright Peter, letās not torture Tony now.ā
Tony smirked, sitting up on top of a stump, and he laughed.
Not a fake laugh meant to distract himself and everyone else from the pain he hid deep inside, no.
It was real.
It was wonderfully, amazingly, beautifully real.
Because Tony hadnāt been happy in a long timeā¦his parentsā death had broken him more than he had ever admitted or accepted.
Heād been fighting the painā¦the emotionsā¦knowing he didnāt have time to deal with them.
But these friendsā¦thisā¦familyā¦reminded him that life was worth living.
Reminded him that there was still good in the dark world around him.
Reminded him that there was still a place, a good place, for him in the world.
Reminded him he wasnāt worthless.
So he laughed.
Because Tony was finally finding real happiness.
Chapter 35
Maria put another bag into the back of the van. āThere. I think thatās everything.ā
Phil nodded, offering her a smile. āI believe so. Letās hope we didnāt forget anything.ā
Sam dropped the small rock he had been throwing up in the air and then catching again, letting it fall to the dirt.
āOne question though,ā Thor poked his head out from the other side of the van, an eyebrow raised, āwhere is Peter?ā
Nick, Phil, and Maria all looked around.
Nick blinked. āThorās rightā¦whereās Peter!?ā
Sam stepped away.
Peter was lost.
It was like that timeā¦all those years agoā¦them running off, getting lost, worrying all the adultsā¦trying to get to the highest spot to get a good view of a forest.
The forest was beautiful and they wanted to see all of it.
And they had only been naĆÆve little boys.
The wind whipped around them as they sat up in the tree, side by side.
Friends since childhood, fathers both being officers in the Air Force.
Sam nudged his friend in the side. āHey, Riley, I think we should get downā¦weāre pretty high up.ā
Riley scoffed, playfully poking Sam in the ribcage. āOh, come on, Samuel, Sam, Sammy,ā he grinned, grabbing another branch, āweāre just getting a good view of the forest, thatās all.ā
āBut Riley-ā
āCome on, Sam, letās go.ā Riley called, pulling himself up onto the next branch.
But the adults must have been in a state of emergency.
They had access to helicopters.
And one flew by, throwing up a lot of extra wing and leaves.
Riley lost his footing.
āNO! RILEY!ā
Sam jolted out of the memory, barely stopping himself from falling to the dirt, having tripped over his own foot.
Everyone was frantically running around, searching for Peter.
They had been too high in the tree.
Sam closed his eyes.
He couldnāt think about Rileyās death right now. Not when Peter was in possible danger.
He shook his head, shoving the memories aside, and began to help with the search.
~*~
Peter could be almost anywhere!
The forest and campground were huge.
āLet him be safe, let him be safe,ā Nick thought silently.
He couldnāt have gone too farā¦he was small, but he wasnāt very quiet most of the time.
Everyone was calling his name, but so far, no luck.
If he had gotten into too much dangerā¦if he had gotten seriously hurtā¦Nick would never forgive himself.
He couldnāt let any of these kids get hurt like that.
Tonyās heart issue had been scary enough.
āPeter!ā Nick called along with everyone else.
Still no reply.
āIs he okay, Uncle Phil!? Iām worried!ā Pietro cried, rushing to Philās side, worry in his bright blue eyes.
Phil got down on one knee, pulling Pietro into a hug. āIām sure heās okay, Pietro. We canāt lose hope. Heās okay. We just have to find him.ā
Pietro nodded, satisfied, giving Phil a hug back.
Phil hugged him tighter, let go, and stood back up.
āHe could be anywhere! Oh, I hope heās safeā¦ā Loki whispered, biting his lip.
āWhat if heās not? What if heās seriously hurtā¦orā¦or what if-?ā
Nick gripped Tonyās shoulder, giving it a quick squeeze. āWe canāt think of that, Tonyā¦heās okay. Iām sure of it.ā
Tony pulled away, turning to face Nick. āBut how can you be sure!? What if heās hurt or worse!?ā
Nick slowly shook his head, knowing Tony was having a bit of a panic attack. āTony, you need to calm downā¦Peterās fine-ā
āYou donāt know that!ā Tony yelled, fists clenched, fear, worry, and unmasked panic in his eyes.
Steveās eyes widened. āTonyā¦ā
Nick gave Tony a raised eyebrow. āThereās no need to raise your voice.ā
Tony blinked a few times. His eyes widened. His gaze fell to his sneakers. āā¦Iām sorry. I-I didnātā¦ah, itāsā¦itās okay if youāre mad, Iāll understand.ā
Nick almost opened his mouth, but a giggle sounded.
He turned.
Maria gasped, rushing to the edge of the forest. āPeter!ā
Peter came out of the bushes, laughing. āHaha, that was fun!ā
Maria got down in front of him. āWhere did you go!?ā
Peter pointed at the woods. āI-I went into the forestā¦why?ā
Maria gave him a quick hug. Pulled away. āDonāt you EVER do that again, okay? We were all looking for youā¦we were scared that we may have even lost you, Peter.ā
Nick let out a deep, relieved sigh.
āI thought we were playing a gameā¦ā Peter whispered softly.
Maria didnāt reply. She scooped Peter up into her arms. She turned to face Nick. āWe should probably get going.ā
Nick nodded. Now that they had found Peter, it was time to head home. āLetās get home.ā
March 25, 2023 at 6:14 pm #138425@freedomwriter76 aww Tony ? and Sam ?
Peter is so cute!!! With the Sāmores ?!! And him just like LALALALA
meanwhile everyone else: AHHHHHHH *chaos intensifies*
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMarch 25, 2023 at 6:16 pm #138427Anonymous
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March 25, 2023 at 6:19 pm #138428@freedomwriter76 canāt wait for the next part ?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebMarch 25, 2023 at 6:23 pm #138429@freedomwriter76
TONY!!!! AHH THE BABY!!! AND SAM!!!! AHHHHH ?????
AND XDXD PETER!!! AHAHAH He’s sooo adorable with those s’mores!!!
#HugRikerSquad
March 25, 2023 at 7:13 pm #138436Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 Aww, I’m glad!!! (hopefully I’ll get one to everyone faster this time! XDā¤ļø)
@lightoverdarkness6 IKR!?!? ?????Lol, right!? Peter is just…?????????? And he’s so funny when he tries to get Tony sticky!!! ?
March 25, 2023 at 8:08 pm #138455@freedomwriter76 AWW SO CUTE
I love seeing adult characters as kids.
Gerald handled that. You donāt question Gerald. (if you know you know)
March 26, 2023 at 11:18 am #138481@freedomwriter76
AWW
okay so I really like both snippets…Peter needs to have someone with him 24/7. Just…yeah. *facepalm because no one was watching him and he’s only six*
Great job! =D
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19March 26, 2023 at 6:09 pm #138530Anonymous
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@keilah-h Aww, thanks! ā¤ļø
Haha, Ikr? It’s so much fun to see/write them as little ones!!! ??
@gwyndalf-the-wise Aww, thanks, I’m glad you like it!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøYes, yes he does XD (lol, IKR!? Like, shouldn’t y’all know better by now!?!?!?!? 0_o)
Awww, thanks girl!!! ???
March 27, 2023 at 1:05 pm #138590@freedomwriter76 I should start doing it……
ha, my dragon charries would be the cutest.
Gerald handled that. You donāt question Gerald. (if you know you know)
March 27, 2023 at 1:26 pm #138593@freedomwriter76
Huh, my first comment didn’t go through…
BUT AHHH THAT WAS SO GOOD! SAMMM AND TONYYY *sobs* and PETER, oh Peter, the sweet babyyyyy
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
March 27, 2023 at 2:31 pm #138598Anonymous
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@keilah-h Aww, that WOULD be cute!!!! ā¤ļø???
@euodia-vision AHHHHH, SO GLAD YOU LOVE IT!!!!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøAwwww, IKR!? The babies!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø?
March 27, 2023 at 2:43 pm #138602@freedomwriter76 I know!!! It would be, wouldn’t it?
Oh, btw I wrote an RP in the character castle if you want to read it.
Gerald handled that. You donāt question Gerald. (if you know you know)
March 27, 2023 at 2:54 pm #138604Anonymous
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@keilah-h Sure would! š
Just replied to it! š
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