My WIP

[Gwyndalf the Wise]

@kyronthearcanin

Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

No problem! Thanks!

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[Keilah H.]

@kyronthearcanin Cool!! Do you have pictures or something of what each planet looks like? Or a description? I’d love to see pictures of each sentient species, too, if you have them. (If you don’t that’s ok!)

Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@keilah-h

Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!

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[Keilah H.]

@kyronthearcanin That’s ok! It won’t let you do more than one picture in a post for some reason, so that might be why.

Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@keilah-h

Oh… That makes sense, then. ? I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.

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[Keilah H.]

@kyronthearcanin Nice!!

Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@keilah-h

It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. ?

Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…

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[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@keilah-h

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[Keilah H.]

@kyronthearcanin Cool!! I really like your character designs.

Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@keilah-h

Thanks!

Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but okay. ??

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[Keilah H.]

@kyronthearcanin Awesome!

Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

[Faith]

@kyronthearcanin

Just read all three chapters and saw all the drawings, and I love it all! I’m really looking forward to another chapter!

"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"

[Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)]

@awsumfaith

Aww, thanks! I’ll probably post another soon. ?

While most of my WIPs end up getting put to the side at least for a little while, this one can’t really do that, because I’m part of a writing group. Basically I have to get a chapter done at least every two weeks, and that’s pushing it. It helps cause they can catch things like small mistakes and even plotholes, because I am definitely a pantser lol. ?

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[Faith]

@kyronthearcanin

Lol, yeah I get it. ?

I’m the opposite, I’ve gotta work out every plot detail before I start writing. I’ve got pretty much nothing written for mine, and I’ve been working on it for a year ???

"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"

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