Folith-Feolin

@loopylin

*Pokes head out from secret vantage point*

Hey, I love long RPs. Please don’t apologize. I’d like to see more.

How else are y’all supposed to practice writing and me spying?

*Disappears into the shadows*

Lol this looks like fun, yall have some really good ones.

You know when you’re a writer when you can no longer fully enjoy mainstream movies… because you see through every plot hole.

@elishavet-pidyon

The tea…XD That should soooo happen.

You know you’re a writer when your sibling physically blocks your mouth from commenting on a new movie

You know you’re a writer when it takes you 1.2 seconds to create a lengthy theory in your head as to why the new Avatar: Last Airbender show is shooting itself in foot and somehow pulling a character’s turmoil inside out, per the constant refer…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh wow, you’re using the Save the Cat method. I’ve never used that outline XD

I can also volunteer with @koshka as a rambler if you need one.

Oh oh oh, maybe you need more setting-type things to spur on some scenes. I don’t know much about A’Grend, but it would be great if the setting, and the objects or people who natural…[Read more]

What if he puts a flower in her hair? What if one of the boys finds a snail or frog and wants to take it home?

@freed_and_redeemed

No comment 😂

@godlyfantasy12

I’m so glad!! I hope it turns out well!!

@everyone

I gotta say, it is an absolute drama of an outline and some of the parts are super crazy 😝 Some deaths make no sense at all, while others make a little too much sense.

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, I’ve been so wanting a sweet scene for poor Leon. He’s been through so much.

A walk would be sweet. What about Leon and his daughter picking flowers? The boys could find an earthworm to tantalize their sister with, which could transition into memories of teasing Aadelheide if you wanted (I don’t know if he did, it just…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Eeeyyy you distracted me in class, and I never get distracted by a phone in class 😂 Now I can say I’ve had a universal teenager experience.

Hugo

Bullies – any kind of bully – sent a shiver down Hugo’s spine, spiking the hair along his neck like a dog.

But he, like this boy, wasn’t aggressive. He would rather smooth himse…[Read more]

Are you struggling with the plotting itself? or missing scenes?

If you have a vague idea for a scene, you have the base for that scene. How would you describe the event? What emotions are the characters going through? Where is the setting? How did the characters get there? Who all is there? Which ideas could happen first? Are some of these ideas…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly how to help, but I’ll try. Do you want scene ideas, or a workable method to create scenes, or something else?

Here’s a list of scenes I would kinda like to see someday. Discard if not helpful or unfitting.

• Aravember chasing a butterfly.
• Ara with a splinter getting helped by November (or some other swap…

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@princesachronicle22

It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?

Wow, kp looks super weird rn

@esther-c @keilah-h

XD I always love Ev

so…I kinda have another problem…I mentioned this before but still struggling…

It relates to Act 2…I am just really struggling with scenes here yall! Idk what to do…I’m trying to outline because If I don’t, my draft is going to end up like all my past ones, unfinished, but just like all the past ones, I can’t think of what to do for the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, that’s a pretty big thing to portray. And has gotten my brain on a rabbit trail with Moses and his siblings. Some people don’t realize that when they are critical of God’s minister they are undermining of God’s authority, just like Mirriam and Aaron over Moses’s non-Hebrew wife. As Mirriam learned, that’s not a good place…[Read more]

@koshka ooh good questions…

So im not entirely sure yet how Riven asks November…I gotta kinda figure it out…but I like that idea…

Basically Riven is kinda stirring up strife in A’Grend agains the royal family, (it’s been brewing some and some of that’s because of Riven and they don’t know that)

It kinda represents how in church you…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Does he know what he will be doing is spying? Or does he think he’s supposed to watch out for Ara to keep her safe or something?

In other words, if he thinks the information being passed to his father will be for Ara’s benefit, why? Does he think that Ara could be unknowingly endangering herself, and that the King wants his…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I was wondering if they had an accent…

Amanda has an east Texas accent/drawl. So how I normally speak. XD

Jayson is from French speaking Canada, but has very little accent due to living to the school and living with the Katz’s since he was 7.

Raphael speaks English with a central American accent, Ashkenazic Yiddish, and…[Read more]

Let’s hope I’m not double posting this…

You know others know you’re a writer, when your dad says in front of the whole church “when my girls hear the word ‘character’, they instantly come up with things like backstory and plot.”

And when you added “character arc, weapon choice, world building” under your breath, you know it’s true.