@felicity
Active 5 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
It was rather cheesy, but…we laughed. That’s all that matters, right? 😀 😀 Sweet!
Lol, yes, that’s all that matters! Speaking of sibling laughs, my little brother is always talking about how many books I read, and he was singing the song from Tangled, the part where Repunzel’s singing “And then I’ll read a book, or maybe two or three.” B…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!
Oh, no, I know when he’s teasing, and he wasn’t teasing 🤣. Okay, good!! 😂
Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁
Yay! Thank you for taking the time to respond 😊!
First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynam…
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh my word!!! That’s super cold.
I think it’s cold in a lot of the US because of the arctic front. Yesterday was terrible. It didn’t go over 3 degrees Fahrenheit!! Today is a little better. Funny thing is, a week from now it will be 58. 😆
I expect we’ll see a polar bear soon
I wouldn’t doubt it. Lol 😂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
*clears throat* Yeah it’s true.
Um, we were having a bit of a joke. We were in the same room, both on KP, and when she said in her intro, “I’m a baby barista”, I put, “hey, my sister works at a coffee shop too!” and…well, we lost it.
Omg, that’s hilarious!!! I love it!! That sounds like something me and my cousin would do (We’re like s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
One thing about writing style: sometimes using more descriptive words for “said” can be distracting and sound contrived.
Yeah, I use said too much. I’ve actually started having my grandma’s I-Pad next to me while I write, and the I-Pad has a list of words to use other than “Said.”
I know, it can be hard not to use “said” all the time, b…
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@felicity
magic in Harry Potter is a bloodline thing (if you remember/know biology it’s basically a Recessive trait) therefore I never thought it would make someone want to do magic as they would know they don’t magic same as kotlc won’t make you try to be an elf because your not an elf or stormlight wont make you try to be a knight radiant becau…[Read more] -
Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
heh…why am I always on my laptop when you look up?
*pauses, looks up, scratches head, looks back at laptop*
*grins*
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Erica replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
He’s fun. Currently, he’s trying to get me to play piano for church!! But I’ve got stage fright 😅😨. Maybe I will sometime.
OH, you should!! I play for youth group . . . I was so scared at first, but now it’s just normal. You get used to it!
Ok, we had an arctic front come in, so the wind chill is literally -26 here.…
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whaley replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@felicity
I think it’s awesome that your dad let you research and determine that it wasn’t the right thing for you 😊 I guess you could say it’s a combination of things for you, and if it’s not your thing on a preference level, that’s cool.
HP is indeed more detailed when it comes to the magic. And you have a good point when it comes to readers…[Read more] -
Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
*waits nervously for @orien21 to get home from work and check KP* 😀
I was so nervous I miss-tagged my own sister.
LOL 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
I love For King and Country!! I went to their concert when I was 8, and I got to meet them!! Luke picked up a rock from the ground and signed it for me and my brother, bc we had forgotten to bring paper 😍❤️😊!! (I’ve had a crush on those two ever since 😂).
NOOOOO WAY!!!! XD XD XD I am so jealous right now!!!!! That is so cool a…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
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Felicity replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
But wait . . . Felicity replied to you after you joined and asked you questions like normal . . .@felicity is this true??
*clears throat* Yeah it’s true.
Um, we were having a bit of a joke. We were in the same room, both on KP, and when she said in her intro, “I’m a baby barista”, I put, “hey, my sister works at a coffee shop too!”…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
I know!!
I really like Dao! I know that the fact that he suddenly showed up and saved them is kind of deus es machina, but it had to happen. 😁
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Welp… I guess posting it on Wednesday didn’t happen. 🤦🏻♀️ 😅 But here it is!! Sorry for making y’all wait so long. I may have forgotten about it… *hides behind pillow* *throws pillow, clears throat, and resumes poise*
Anywho, I put a little bit of the end of the previous chapter…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Lol! I wright better tired too, but I write slowly.
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Arien replied to the topic Title for a type of work in my WIP? in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 1 month ago
How about Liberator? I just looked up synonyms of release (thanks @felicity )
Afterthoughts of a Liberator. I don’t know if that’s what you’re going for. It sounds a little like something in The City of Ember. XD
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Arien started the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 1 month ago
For me, I can’t even remember why I started writing. I was bored, I guess, and I asked Mom for a piece of paper and started writing a rip-off of a Boxcar Children book. I got a few chapters in, then abandoned it. I was maybe 8 at the time. And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 1 month ago
Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions
Whoa!! 😍 That sounds Heavenly!
Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I like listening to For King…
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