Felicity

@elishavet-pidyon

Go ahead!

@godlyfantasy12

I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!

“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, November…*groan* no one better touch him again! I have an elf and a half-elf in my ranks.

(Yes Aramis, that was a threat)

@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?

@koshka UUUGHHH I LOVE THEM!!! I am a SUCKER FOR ELVESSSS and u write them so beautifully…..

November

November shifted with his sling, frowning as he tried to maneuver the strap behind his neck with one hand.

Man, was this thing itchy….

And so was his arm…

Nope. Don’t think about it…otherwise it’s going to bother you all day!…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

So everyone else has said everything already lol!! Mainly about Christopher’s disrespect a bit, maybe show that he actually doesn’t see her that way, but her misbelief has everything she’s seeing skewed (because that’s usually how it goes)

In truth it could be he knows exactly how strong she is…but he’s not strong enough t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w

Y’all’s character is are so…so…AHH!! You have to save them, the poor, dear, charies!

Anyway…

Almarrin

Whispers all this morning were stirring the quiet anger inside him.

“From the second story…”

“…heard he just tripped…”

Almarrin slung his backpack over his shoulder,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 hey! Did u ever finish that scene with the Boys? 🥺😣 what happens to them?!

@freedomwriter76 awesome job! BUT UGH EZRAAAA 😭

@felicity

Oh I just saw that you replied😅🤦🏻‍♀️.

You’re so welcome! I Hope you like it😁.

Yes, Golden Retrievers are great dogs. One of our neighbors has one, and he runs around the neighborhood all the time. He’s like our dog because he stops at our house all the time😂. That’s another reason we haven’t gotten a dog. My dad jokes all the time ab…[Read more]

@felicity @freedomwriter76

Oh yeah! I love Ezra! He’s so sweet to Eva 🥲🥰.

@wilder-w

Arabella

“Oh! Hello, Hope…” Ara smiled, though she was sure it didn’t meet her eyes. She unclenched her fists. “Sorry…just…a bit tense. Everything’s a bit hectic right now.”

Hope nodded, “Yea…I-I’m sure…”

Ara folded her hands, “I suppose we never got formerly introduced, but…well, we already know each other’s names,” Ara laughed lig…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon AHHH ALWIN YOU ARE BREAKING MY HEART!!!

GASP!!

I just had a thought…

I want Alwin to meet Paxton….

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Jocelyn

As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.

No wonder Dawson became so tense…

Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…

It was…just so wrong.

Like so many other things she’d seen…

 …[Read more]

@starofthenorth

I think everyone pretty much already said what I think, but I’ll say it anyway. 😁 While they are both going at it pretty strong, I realize that they’re both mad at each other and are probably saying things that they don’t completely mean. But yeah, they both kinda come off as a feminist/chauvinists so maybe make it more about…[Read more]

@felicity

Ok! I’ll be waiting (no pressure lol)

Can’t wait to read it though!

And yeah, I totally thought you meant you were going to face us, the giants 🤣

@starofthenorth

Everyone else basically said exactly what I was going to, so here’s a condensed form of my two cents:

I would make it about Briana, not girls. So say something like “Why am I not taking a watch?”, just to remove the focus at the beginning. I would also revise the part about being pretty. Maybe put inphasis on ‘I’m your king,’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yesss, girl!! Any of your charries deserves to be fan girled over😂😊❤️!! Your so good at creating meaningful characters. But especially Riker😊❤️. And Leo❤️❤️.

@Felicity

yeah! We’d love to see your writing! Lol, we aren’t scary giants then are we? 🤣

I have never had a bad experience sharing writing here!

@starofthenorth

Ooh! Interesting.

Ok it’s a bit hard to get a full feel for it, I’ll do my best to provide some feedback anyways! 😀

It seems really unhealthy (Ig that’s what your going for, nothing wrong with portraying that)

I would say an unhealthy dynamic gets a bit more complicated when you add romance, I saw the couple hints in there…[Read more]

@arien

Favorite character? Ah, that’s hard. Too hard… I can’t 🤣 I love them all! Probably Sam or Boromir, though. What about you?

Ok, yeah, I’ve heard of rustic fantasy, just not the name. I love that you don’t have to care about being historically accurate. 😂 Just make stuff up!

Ok, cool!

Yes, LOTR! I have some of those on my classical…[Read more]