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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Some more ideas:
- Leo comes across Emerie once or twice. They don’t interact much, but Leo tires something daring and probably dumb, and Emerie warns her not to get on Hemlock’s bad side. Or, maybe she’s the one who Leo asks if Hemlock’s her dad, which she obviously answers no to.
- Crosshair shows up to Tantiss in much the same way he does in…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins all righty!
Ideas (You can take or leave any of them):
- Leo awakes imprisoned on a starship in hyperspace, Crosshair guarding her. She is going to confront him, but he’s called away before she can really get anything out of him, or some other stormtroopers take her away or something. They take her on an Imperial shuttle to…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
but ok, I’m good with them showing up in random places and then finding each other
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
oh, that worked. weird
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I can’t post on here? stinking ghost
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
What I just wrote is so random lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
random question for anyone, but…….
do you ever look up those AI-generated covers for songs where they make fictional characters sing?
(I’m not trying to start a discussion over whether any of it is legal or moral. I’m just asking if you’ve ever done it)
I’m currently listening to a whole playlist where the only singers are Team…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic If Only | a poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
That was really good!! I liked the contrast between the beauty of the landscape and the brokenness of their situation.
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Woah, that was way longer than I intended it to be. Whoops XDD
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey!! I just read a chapter you posted a while back and it looks really interesting! I’ll probably stick around to read the rewrite. I’m excited!!
And to answer your questions…
First, about magic, I totally respect others’ opinions of not reading or watching stuff like that (like Harry Potter). But my opinion is that stuff l…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
If you want, Ev and Adrian could meet up with them!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins I don’t think so. I was just asking what you needed help with. Sorry about being so blunt lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@princesachronicle22 ooh I remember Serin and Kun’en! That was actually a cool one. I actually haven’t worked with Allen much since that RP faded, since he’s not a main character in the predominant part of the story timeline I write in. But I’d be willing to dust him off for the RP again, he was an interesting charrie.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c me neither. I have something of a romance-comedy Star Wars fanfic, but it’s also peppered with a lot of action, so….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@princesachronicle22 IDK. Snake just asked if anyone had ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae oh ok! What’s it about?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins what do you need help with?
oh also I probably can’t post links here right now (they’re affected in the same way as pictures probably) but I found this hilarious short video of the actor for the clones messing around with with Hunter, Wrecker and Crosshair action figures and doing all their voices. It was so funny.
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Koshka replied to the topic Coming up with scenes in the forum Plotting 2 years, 6 months ago
Do you want individual scene ideas, or help coming up with them?
Here’s what I’m sort of doing to come up with scenes. I’m using the Save the Cat notecard system for plotting.
For Act II (fun and games) is basically the characters either “winning” or “losing” as their arc decides. So…
What is the big story point you want this a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I have a few charries that could meet him! I’ll probably RP as my character Fynn later today, so they could run into each other if you want. (:
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
This is really good!! I love it!! I haven’t read your writing a little bit, but I can see improvement. (I know it’s always hard to see that in your own writing [unless I look back to stuff I wrote two years ago XD], so I wanted to let you know. 😉 )
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