This piece is inspired by my space-fantasy world. I did it a couple weeks ago during youth group.

Hmmm… I know that if I don’t tag anyone, not many will see it. Well, then: @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @sarahsmile @emilysf @loopylin @thelooneyone @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper [Read more]

@emilysf

World-building is so much fun!😆 How far into that do you like to go? Like what the world is currently like, or into it’s history?

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.

Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.

Vulkasin

A cool breeze welcomed them to the outdoors. Glorious, wonderful free air. No low ceilings or hanging rafters to bash out ones head off. The lady shone in the heavens,…[Read more]

Mwahaha… It is supposed to be, just not exactly in the normal sense. He is dying in this scene, but *spoiler* he makes it through. Good! It has to get my readers’ attention and hopefully shake them.

This is actually pulling up some writing struggles on my side. The overarching theme of this book is hope, beyond reason, beyond the…[Read more]

Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?

By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?

Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.

Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…

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Finally, here it is!!

Viktor

The rest of the group wasn’t following. Or at least, not quickly, and not completely. Viktor gritted his teeth and darted a glance behind him.

He saw a nightmare.

His nightmare all…[Read more]

This post was actually made because I could use a little bit of help with something about her, and it also kinda includes ano…[Read more]

But what I’m really leaning on is, when November is born, he is, quite literally, a light to Corvina’s darkness.

She lives in your average wicked black villain castle in those grey crac…[Read more]

So…questions anyone? XD!!!!

ALSO THIS IS LIKE MY BIGGEST SERIES SPOILER SO PLZ…IT STAYS IN THIS FORUM!!!!!

Anyone who doesn’t just…ah…don’t read this post? XD idk lol

SO…

My series is planned to be 7-8 books long. I have about 8 MCs, and each are POV MCs with their own Arcs (except 1 who is doesn’t really have much of an arc or many POVs at this point but I still consider them an MC.)

My antagonist, Corvina, is…[Read more]

*regrets immediately*

JK. Anyway, I had this idea a while back to make this post where we could come here and talk about our WIPs and MAJOR SPOILERS AND PLOT TWISTS THAT WE ARE SOO EXCITED ABOUT AND HATE HAVING TO KEEP SECRET FROM FRIENDS AND FAMILY WITHOUT HAVING TO DISCLAIMER IN THE POST!!

Thus this forum was…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Vulkasin

The air in this corridor felt heavy, Vulkasin almost had to focus…[Read more]

Yes! Characters and themes are usually what I get attached to most in both stories I write and read.

@freedomwriter76

Forgiveness is a really great theme! And also one that I don’t see to too often in stories. Do you have a method of how you choose the themes for you stories?

@devastate-lasting

Having all the pieces fall into place is…[Read more]

Viktor

Silence descended upon them, letting only thought move. Viktor fingered his sling and waited for the sound of heavy footsteps.

Rough leather between his fingers, smooth stones at his belt. He glanced at Alya. She clutched her torch and gave him something like a smile.

What would happen…[Read more]

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to get something more submitted tonight, but if I can it will be way late so don’t wait for me. In fact I don’t know if I’ll have much free time for a bit; this week is already cramped.

*Sigh*

Vulkasin

Just at the name Viktor’s face blanched, jaw clenched. His hand trembled…[Read more]

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Corvina

The girl…

Zoe.

She was gone now. But Corvina could still hear her howls, desperately wailing through the corridors. They grew fainter and fainter, but they never went too far…[Read more]

Yes, I do. Unfortunately, the extreme busyness that has kept me mostly off here for the past week continues. This why I am once more quite belated, despite having started (and nearly finished) a response multiple times.

However, here it one is! May it fill the needs it needs to.

Alyona

Dorwainian gaurds may be…[Read more]

I’m sorry I haven’t responded. We’ve been busy preparing for like, four different things coming up. Although I’ve started a reply twice, neither were finished.

So! Here goes.

Alyona

Thankfully, the lady took it. She looked much better off wrapped in thick wool.

Alyona knew what a sacrifice it was for her…[Read more]

Ooo, yeah. I feel like Harry Potter would be one of those series so many people would love to read for the first time again. Especially because it’s really nostalgic for a lot of people as well. It’d be kinda like reliving a piece of your childhood.

@madelyn

Narnia would be so fun to read for the first time again!…[Read more]

Rinzler and Feather

Rinzler still thought Feather was too trusting, but he went along with the group as they meandered through the hallways.

“Are we really the only ones here?” he asked, looking around. “This castle doesn’t exactly look abandoned.”

“Could be an old World Controller school, like the Sanctuary,”…[Read more]

I have a question for any of you who have tried writing platforms similar to Wattpad, for context. I recently finished co-writing a book with my sister and we’re not sure what we want to do with it yet, so we’ve decided to try uploading it to a writing site over…[Read more]

Zlatan and Vulkasin

“She?” once again the conversation had shifted to that silent third person. Nyx.

Apparently the fox answered, because Ara turned to Victor and Alyona. “Any idea who she is?”

The siblings glanced at each other. “Ah.” Victor slipped something glinting into his belt. His mantle was…[Read more]

The Gang

The group came to a halt and Ara let out a breath of relief at the sight of Alyona and Viktor.

They seemed to be fine.

But not alone.

Or at least…they hadn’t been…

Ara had heard another voice. A female, by the sound of it, but when they’d gotten there, whoever it was had left.

Viktor and Alyona…[Read more]

Ok, so now my characters are in an interesting predicament, as I’m trying to get a former hand on both of them.

This may get most interesting.

Alyona

“I… I … don’t. I’m…” the stranger fumbled for words, becoming less formidable by the second. A draft blew down the passage causing Alya’s light to dance and the…[Read more]

I’m sorry y’all. I just found time to actually sit down and write.

Vulkasin

Apparently Lyn had as much a desire to kill them all as his Endurance  Instuktor. The older Vulk’s voice kept calling back to him, Run till you drop, and v’en you do remember, I’m be’ind you. So keep going.

But Lyn was ahead…[Read more]

Protagonist Antagonist

@emilysf =Zoe and Milla

@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina

@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor, Alyona and Ocran

@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin

@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico

@keilah-h = Rinzler and…[Read more]

Wowsers. =)

Those look awesome (though I have absolutely no idea what the Council of Bust is)!

@godlyfantasy12

I found a song for Mitchel! And I think I’m changing his name to Mikkel, and his sister may not be the other MC of this book, but that book is the last in the series, so I still have plenty of time to figure them out. XD

Anyway, his song…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @emilysf @koshka

Corvina

The two had walked on in silence for a moment, Corvina’s aching now just a dull reminder. She sighed.

She was getting nowhere fast.

This castle could be endless for all she knew, and who owned it?

This…Malcolm character Zoe was so afraid of? Whoever it was, Corvina was ready to face him or her and make them tell her where Ara…[Read more]

So … how does this work? Do we just insert things from our characters’ POVs from our own stories? Sorry, I haven’t been on KP in a while, so I’m late to the party.

Bwahahaha! I love how all these characters interact. XD

Alyona

A gasp leapt into her mouth. This person wanted to help them?

A mere glance showed her to be between Viktor and herself in height, but this wasn’t what struck Alyona.

The girl was dressed in rags. Brightly dyed rags, but still not very adequate.…[Read more]

Corvina

It had taken everything to stay.

The little girl shrieked apologies and wailed to no one in particular. Her eyes weren’t on Corvina, that was for sure.

What was she suppo…[Read more]

also could u give a short rundown about her (I have a notes I keep track of RP charries in and who they belo…[Read more]

Hi!! I’m back, but warning now, I may have to disappear again in the somewhat near future.

Zlatan and Vulkasin

The corridor was dark, the small oil lamp bright in his hand. Shadows swayed to it’s flickering flame.

Which way led to the brother and sister?

“Nyx,” Zlatan turned to the little fox. He…[Read more]

Viktor

They gained the out leading corridor, passing side halls with rapid succession. Soon there would be a narrow window and they’d have some light.

How he hungered for that light!

Their pursuer was still there, but much less frightening. He nearly scolded himself for bolting in the first place. Nearly.

As…[Read more]

Okay, so it deleted my response, I don’t know if the original will pop up later as well, but I’m going ahead and posting this, since I thankfully have the story part saved.

I also don’t know how well this one worked out, but here goes!

By the way, Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she has a talent for spooking…[Read more]

So, I’m not sure how well this one worked out, but here goes!

Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she seems to have a talent for spooking my charries. XD It’s not her fault though.

Viktor

They were close, so close. He could feel the draft from the approaching door.

Thankfully Alya hadn’t been injured in her…[Read more]

Hm… it’s hard to get anything specific in my head! It hink I’d like to know just some things that you think are cool and why, and also if there are common misconceptions about Catholicism that most people believe that aren’t true.

Wow! So many siblings! I love it tho! I love giant families XD And that’s exciting about the oldest! One…[Read more]

Thanks for the inputs! 😀

Awesome!

Well, yeah, I tend to be around quite a few people with opposing worldviews. Though it usually ends up with far more conflict and split paths than heroic character arcs that inspire the people around them, haha.

I think it’s great that you have a character that displays what the end of the MC’s character arc will be, so maybe for your students it could be the opposite of that. They could be the resistance to the MC’s character arc.

They would demonstrate different world views on the theme of “changing the world for the better”, Which would…[Read more]

Wow! That’s such a cool idea!

I wish I could help more but I just don’t know how! I feel like I would need to know more about the twins and how the actual magic system works with the whole “opposites and double gifted” thing.

I’m still trying to figure out how to display the themes in my book, but one of the best pieces of advice I’ve…[Read more]