Ellie Wingfeather

@whalekeeper

Look, I never wanted to make you feel like you were less capable of handling criticism than the rest of us. My points about God and self-publishing were more directed towards everyone on the thread, but even so, I got hung up on the details and misunderstood you. That was my fault, not yours, and I apologize ❤️

I’m sorry I made you f…

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@acancello

Ummmmm……that’s like one of my nightmares…like my biggest fear is evil scientists experimenting on me!!!! (I know, I read too much lol)

Maybe you could tie into the machine factor with your title? Idk. I’m also pretty bad at coming up with names XD

@acancello

Sure! Also, is there a connection between CHIME and the whole moon situation, or no? Because you might not want to name the book something related to the moon if it doesn’t really come up in the book. Does that make sense? Basically, if the power shortage thing is just the setting of the story and doesn’t really have anything to do…[Read more]

@acancello
Yep! I don’t think it’s unrealistic that scientists would try to launch something into space to collect energy, although I don’t really know how sunlight and energy works out there. @thearcaneaxiom might have some better suggestions. (Sorry if you’ve already been on this topic, I don’t remember.)

@acancello

Okay, got it. So it harvests energy from the sun (maybe because it’s slightly close to the sun than the earth is?).

@esther-c

It’s totally fine! I understand, life gets busy! 🙂 No rush!

@acancello

So, where does the moon get the energy from? And why wouldn’t it just be like, a satellite or something? What’s special about a moon?

I’m thinking maybe something with Lunar in the title? Lunar Overload..?

I kinda think Eclipse would be interesting, because it references the moon and basically, they’re having an electricity…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith @grcr

Those are good points! I’m using the You version app, but I might check out the Bible project app! I don’t really have too much to add, but I enjoyed reading what you guys thought!

@esther-c

In case you haven’t seen the RP yet…I RP’d Liv’s response to Fynn’s awkward question, lol

@acancello

So…what exactly is C.H.I.M.E.? Like why are they taking people? (I understand if you can’t tell me…but one, I really have wanted to know ever since you told me about your book, and two…it might help me help you with the title!)

@esther-c

I think you’re trying to say that if God’s will is for you to write and publish this story, then sometimes you have to self-publish because traditional publishers won’t accept it… is that what you were getting at? Correct me if I’m wrong. XD I see what you’re saying though. This is probably where prayer is really important (I mean, it al…

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Actually @rae  RP’d last…so it still is Freedom’s turn.

@jonas

I think it’s Freedom’s turn?

@beth-torres No problem! Don’t worry, your egood! 😁

Yeah, I think 3 a day still should for me!

@kyronthearcanin @jonas

If it were in a published book I would think ‘this isn’t very good,’ but for what it is, it’s not bad. How were you that good at seven?

Exactly!! That’s pretty insane, lol.

@kyronthearcanin

Hey, that’s amazing that you’re coming back to KP!

I don’t think we’ve really met…but I’m Sara (if you hadn’t already deduced that by my profile name…XD)!

I write mostly fantasy, but a little sci-fi and contemporary and basically whatever lol

I’m excited to get to know you on here!

@mineralizedwritings

Oooh I loved that…[Read more]

@esther-c

Liv 

She pursed her lips. What an awkward question!

“Well…” she bit her lip. “What exactly do you want to know?”

@jonas

Unless it was a historical fiction or something, which doesn’t allow that sort of thing.

Fawkes and Romanov by Nadine Brandes are both historical fiction with fantasy mixed in. They’re both really good.

@ellie-wingfeather

I have only ever finished a flash fiction piece, a short story, and a cringy picture book when I was like seven. But I have a ton of started and abandoned ideas, ranging from like a page long to 20k words. I’m not sure if I’ll ever finish any of them, but I might go back to some eventually.

Now I lean towards softer science…[Read more]

@ellie-wingfeather

I’ve only ever finished two long stories.
One was about four kids who go to another world…It can be found in the topic “what’s the cringiest thing you’ve ever written”.

And one was about a broken family who learns to love each other. I’ve never posted ANY of this.

I have a huge binder full of stories I’ve started but never…[Read more]