Jaybird

@elishavet-pidyon hmmm

Well first off we now have other charries in this AU to help reach Alwin 😊

secondly, you could always bring in Winton to the AU, perhaps as a teacher (one of those that wishes to truly connect with his students, or to change some of the things he sees in the school?)

Or a chaplain.

A preacher (like u mentioned the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I totally get that and ROFL ABOUT THE THOUGHT IDEA THING XD!!!

But Alain’s POV is really good and it’s gonna be so great when he becomes redeemed!! In this AU EVEN!!!

@elishavet-pidyon agh poor Alwin!!!

also….so I don’t wanna be hard to get along with at all!! And I do have things I’ve read with a bit of language but I just would really prefer on here (since with this sight it is one place I know for a fact is a okay as a Liberty) if it could be “He cursed” She cursed” kinda keep it to that?

&nbs…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 we’re still on the road headed home, so we listened online. It was very good, about how praise heals, and trials grow patience ect. (From James and Romans). @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Oh Hitchens has no idea how close he came to one of those brothers hunting him down.

And um…so the poetic justice of using one of the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 oh boy…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Arabella

Wolf…Fox…

“Grimm and Nyx! You’ve seen them!” Luna cried, eyes sparkling. “Oh, then they are here!” A small smile lit her lips, her mind obviously not grasping the man’s sadistic grin…

The words he’d been implying before…

He’d met them…along with some others.

A blonde boy…<…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you, that helps a lot!

I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features in my mind.

Thank you! I enjoy describing how I see the characters in my mind, but I didn’t want t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon anyone here?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Okay y’all!

Zlatan

The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.

Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.

There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h can we get started back here again?? K rlly wanna continue it!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Jocelyn

“Oh sure! This is my second year!”

“That’s really not that long…”

“Feels like it! Well…it’s my second year of high school. We came here for middle grade too. Well, our final years of middle grade anyway.” Lyn smiled, shoving the box of multi-colored pencils into her bright red and gold bag.

“By the by…” Lyn pursed h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Almarrin

The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”

Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”

“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”

“I bowe…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper

Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.

“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…

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@freedomwriter76 ahh Erich, I luv u lol!! But don’t go getting into trouble!! Tho…I feel like that’s where we’re heading!!

@elishavet-pidyon u on and want to RP with Reúven and them meeting Lyn and Grimm?

I’m finally on for a while!

@koshka @wilder-w @keilah-h

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)

Inglor

Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.

Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce them? I gotta clean some lol! So I’ll be a bit sporadic.

also who all has charries that likes to read? I’m wondering because…Paxton likes to read, but he’s not allowed to freely roam libraries and such (btw the academy has a HUGE LIBRARY) and if he’s caught in a library, bookstore etc he’ll get punishe…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”

Ok? He was far from ok…

But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.

This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon hey who do u want Reúven and them to meet?

they could meet November and Ara if u like, or Lyn and Grimm. Up to u.

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w

Ma poor Paxton….

Paxton

Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.

He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.

Thankfully, no one came.

He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]