Elishavet Elroi

@sarafini

I can readily agree with you about the first book. Compared to the others, it wasn’t that good. The series was recommended to me by a friend and I knew my cousin had read it, so I tried it. I did the first book for a book report and actually found it to be one of the easiest book reports I’ve ever done.

I agree with @elishavet-pidyon ab…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Realized I might want to tag you too 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon so I used an AI Art Generator called Dream by Wombo. It was kinda just typing in words and using different themes and seeing what worked and didn’t and regenerating till I liked something.

And what also Was incredible is they have the option to add ur own picture and use their AI with that picture also to kinda morph it and u…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

I made a board for the first book in my series!!!

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @sarafini @esther-c @everyone

Here is Chapter 2, for anyone who wants to read it. This is my first draft, to be clear, and I am looking for any feedback and critiques…[Read more]

And now to invite some citizens of this kingdom.

@esther-c @felicity @freedomwriter76 @joy-caroline @gracie-j @elishavet-pidyon @you-reading-this @anyone-else

@koshka 😭 THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL WITH ALMARRIN REMEMBERING HIS SISTER!! AND THE WAY U WROTE THAT SCENE DESCRIBING HOW HE SAW HER!!! AND THE NANA AND EVERYTHING UGH!!!

@elishavet-pidyon Aramis really is a slug!!! And ur charries are so sweet! Ugh Viktor 😭

Paxton doesn’t know his daddy either…

@freedomwriter76 Yaay for Himmler!!! Ah I luv him! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Well….now it’s time for Paxton to arrive home…

Paxton

Paxton fiddled nervously with his collar as the large oak doors swung open, held by one of his mother’s many servants. He gave a small nod to the person, along with a small smile, but, as usual, they paid him no…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka

November

“Alright Paxton,” Ara smiled as the door opened, letting the little boy out onto the sidewalk. Her eyes creased slightly in concern as her lips pursed. “Are…are you sure your going to be alright?”

Ara’s mother glanced back at them through the mirror, brow raised in question. Ara gave her a lo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon (I’m just going to go ahead and write from where Ara and them are headed down the street toward where her mom is picking them up)

Paxton

Paxton kept close to Ara as the threesome walked, glancing at the sun as it continued ever slowly downward. The afternoon had passed a bit, though a good chunk still r…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka soo I think I’m gonna vote to reconvene later. Because now…

All the kiddies must go home….

😳

@elishavet-pidyon oh gotcha!! Yea that’s fine with me and makes sense lol!

@wilder-w @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Question: Should Almarrin drive an old car, or a vehicle strangely remenecent of a humvee?

Almarrin

For a second he stared at the name, memorizing each letter. Then he made sure Hope was comfortable on the bench outside the nurse’s office. It was dark inside; apparently the nurse h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 AWW WOLFGANG!! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Paxton

Paxton smiled bright as Wolfgang hugged Dietrich, knocking the wind out of the older boy. Dietrich gasped, eyes wide as saucers, growing glassy once again. He bit his lip, obviously to keep from crying.

“It’s good to have you two back,” Winton smiled. He looked at the clock on th…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon aggghh my heart 😭 ❤️❤️❤️ @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h

Paxton

He wasn’t entirely sure what to do next…

He’d…never really been in this situation before.

Most of the time he was the one being comforted. And that…

Was very rarely…in fact…that had been happening the most….recently, with his new friends…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Paxton

Paxton bit his bottom lip, eyes softening as Dietrich wiped away a few stray tears. He’d never seen the tall, gruff boy cry. He’d only ever seen him angry…and bitter. Like he was…mad at the world.

But…maybe all of that was just…a mask. For something else…

Paxton’s mind flashed to his half-bro…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @wilder-w

Hunter and Omega

“Where do you two live then?” Eva asked, rather softly.

“For a while, we were sorta…wandering…” Hunter admitted. “Then our oldest brother found us a guardian on the edge of the city. Not the nicest part of town, although at least she takes care of us…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 yuuup!!!

also @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon YALL I DID NOT REALIZE BUT Charles Dickens’ Christmas Carol was essentially self published!!!

That’s so cool to me!!

@elishavet-pidyon

What you write about seems so cool!! I’d love to hear about it! Don’t worry, I can rant too!

1. Probably the 18th century Irish cottage

2. Everton would be a phoenix. Amidala would be… maybe a fox? Corie would be a unicorn lol. Tyrone would be a wolf.

3. My fave character would most likely be Artham or any of the Igiby child…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 😭 OH MAN DIETRICH!!! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Arabella

Dietrich ran out suddenly, causing everyone to stare at the now closed door in school. Winton stood, face filled with torment at what to do….stay? Or go?

Ara stood, eyes wide.

She pursed her lips, glancing at November and then the others around her.

“What…?” Angelin…[Read more]