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@elishavet-pidyon

*Smiles at the names*
I love the ending! I may change ‘Milla was curled up on the ground,’ to ‘I could just see Milla curled up on the ground,’ or something like that. But then again, I don’t know.

@everyone

Sorry for the late reply, I’ve had a busy couple of days.

@elishavet-pidyon

That picture is gorgeous! So cute! You’re a really good artist.😊 And I love Trumpkin.

@keilah-h

I love your main character’s name. I feel like the cat is an interesting character …😁 And I love that you have a character called Nyx too!

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@gracie-j @elishavet-pidyon @koshka I could actually use some help rn lol.

I need some help with 2 things.

I’ve got my protagonist’s Desire and misbelief down but not his fear, and I’ve got of my side character’s Desire and fear down but not his misbelief

Kaithen- Protagonist

Desire: To be more then just an errand boy, to be more then one who…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Ahhh thank you so much! And yes!! It is!! Thank you, I made it today!

Inspiration is absolutely FLOWING! Which proves this must be a God thing because this does not usually happen. I’m writing character stuff (Fear, Misbelief, Desire things like that) that I can’t usually figure out very quickly) and I’m so excited! Thank the Lord!

@elishavet-pidyon oh my word!!! Gorgeous!!!! You’re so talented my gosh!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Awww… That’s beautiful. He looks so real!

@elishavet-pidyon I used that sort of thing in my novel–my MC’s dad uses a few self-tailored expressions. “Crosshairs and cutlery, you just won’t give up, will you?”

@godlyfantasy12 I have a character named Nyx too! She is a good deal more annoying, though. She’s also female, and she’s a Deinonychus (a certain species of dinosaur).

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, I’m using the yellow manor house and the river, but without the bridge, in my current 2nd draft of my WIP.

Maybe the ground keepers are made to stay there against their will. Blackmail maybe. And if they leave something horrible will happen. I smell a mystery. Hehe

@elishavet-pidyon

Yep! Haha! It was really cool! It was rather large with a courtyard in the back that we weren’t allowed to go in. It a yellow manor with black shutters and roof, a large front door, and three huge steps out front with white pillars. I spent most of my time outdoors with my siblings when we stayed there. I remember a huge curved…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I agree. Beautiful design by a beautiful designer.
Your plans for owning a fennec are wonderfully complicated lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

I haven’t read too many Redwall either, I just really enjoyed the books I did. (read, that is.)
I’ve never heard of Mistmantle. I will look it up tho!

@trahia-the-minstrel

Your book sounds very exiting! I love that idea.

@elishavet-pidyon

Oh, I love animal books. When I was in elementary school and half way through middle school, those were the only books I’d read XD (btw I’m defiantly not saying books like that are only for kids. I still really enjoy them:)
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@elishavet-pidyon here’s another reference pic! As u can see, fennec foxes have these adorable little reddish fur lines on their faces in the shape of a triangle and the most ADORABLE ears

@elishavet-pidyon I do not mind at all! As for markings not really! He looks like ur average fennec fox! He’s about the size of what Koshka imagines her creature, an agile housecat but a tad bigger then a kitten

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

thx!! And…agh hehe yea! 😉 tho this is the first time the reader is formally introduced to Nyx’s ability to speak, and it’s more of a mental telepathy thing then audible voice, (tho it does sound audible if that makes any sense) he only does it to those he trusts and that’s why This is the first time Ara and Novembe…[Read more]

@koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @elishavet-pidyon

I have a scene from my first draft that is completely from Nyx’s point of view. It’s the only scene from his POV, and I’m not sure if I will keep it but I do kinda like it (again it’s only the first draft so yea) but if y’all are interested here it is!)

How had he not seen It earlier?

Nyx made a ma…

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@koshka

Thanks!

I love your titles! And your books sound cool — I love the fact you have this sibling aspect in 1 and 3😊. Nothing better than some good sibling banter and play offs. A question — are your books about actual animals, or hybrid human-animal type beings, or about humans who are part of a group that call themselves animals?

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@trahia-the-minstrel

Your book sounds well beat out. Is it one book or a series? YES, it IS intriguing!

@elishavet-pidyon

What inspired Possibility? It sounds good and deep. And squirrels are so neat.

I’ve read GE too. They’re wonderful books.

@godlyfantasy12

If it’s not too much of a spoiler, where did the name A’Grend come from?

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! Those deeper meanings play around in my book a lot.

@elishavet-pidyon Thanks!

All your stories sound cool — I love the sound of the feel in the first one; the second, I just love it in general, it sounds like the sort of story I love to write and read😊; the third — I don’t normally read animal stories, but yours sounds quite fun — have you read the Green Ember? That’s a good series for someone w…[Read more]