Elishavet Elroi

@elishavet-pidyon

What? Maraly kissed him, and you can totally tell Kalmar likes her! Plus, they have like, REALLY similar personalities in some ways.

However… I can kind of see what you mean about Kalmar and Gayla. Both of them being former Fangs, I guess they would understand each other pretty well.

You’re making me second-guess myself! xD…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Jocelyn & Nyx

A horribly loud sound rattled down the hall. Lyn tried to ignore it, but Nyx’s ears plastered to his head and he let out a shrill shriek. He dropped to the ground, paws over his head.

“Nyx!” Lyn skidded to a stop. She bent beside him, gently stroking his back.

Another terribly loud blast of sound. Nyx shrie…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I am really loving this! Writing Nyx and Lyn is so much fun! I’m honestly enjoying this RP because it’s helping me get into their Charries and I don’t know when the last time I’ve had this much fun writing has been honestly!! (That’s why I keep posting a lot btw. Sorry if I bother anyone XD. I have no life ROFL)

Jocelyn &…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon OOH NICE!!

Jocelyn & Nyx

“Missy, what do you mean by your impertinence?” The man’s eyes narrowed, taking on a menacing glare. “What are you doing here? You are not one of the servants. Are you a spy?”

Jocelyn pursed her lips and tilted her head. Okay, not friendly.

Nyx hissed and she snapped her head in his direction…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon
Hi Elishavet,

All that was soooo helpful!! Especially the LOTR example! I like how you asked different questions and how it becomes the readers turn to ask or respond to those questions. I’m definitely going to contemplate that more! I think I’m getting the hang of the whole theme thing now!
I appreciate your help!!!!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Jocelyn & Nyx

”This guy just gonna stare at us all day?”

”Maybe he’s the brooding silent type?”

They both shrugged and waited for a reply.

XD. Jocelyn over here breaking the fourth wall JK JK

(Sorry if this posts in duplicate; I’m trying to navigate KP’s tendency to delete posts when I edit them. XP)

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are epic).

That does sound like fun! (I get that. XD I am the queen of cursory Google searches… or else hours-long…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh, neat! I have a culture that avoids living on land, too, with more Maori and Hawaiian influence on the language and some Viking inspiration planned for their culture (and their hair, because Viking braids are epic).

That does sound like fun! (I get that. XD I am the queen of cursory Google searches… or else hours-long…[Read more]

Here’s a list I made to keep track (definitely not weird)

Protagonist Antagonist

@emilysf =Zoe and Sofia

@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina

@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor and Ocran

@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin

@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico

If I lost someone please correct me!

@elishavet-pidyon SOUNDS GOOD XD

Jocelyn & Nyx

”Friendly?”

”Doesn’t sound very friendly.” Nyx huffed, turning up his nose and giving it a twitch. Lyn shrugged. She waved enthusiastically to the stranger; an adult, who was glaring at the two in shock and confusion. He also seemed to be appalled by their presence.

As though by entering t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce ocran to Jocelyn or u want me to?

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

By the way, whoever I mention first is the actual point of view for a section.

Vulkasin and Zlatan.

Door after door brought nothing in reward, and by the second corridor Vulkasin was sure they were headed higher into the castle, not down to some courtyard.

He was about to suggest they turn around when Ara’s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon oh I did make a Jocelyn scene btw but u may have missed it lol! Looks like we submitted at the same time but they kinda coincide well sooo yea!

@elishavet-pidyon I think I’m gonna have Jocelyn and Nyx run into Ocran and then maybe they be like OKIE BAI if they realize he’s bad or something lol

Jocelyn & Nyx

“Hey, check it out! Light that isn’t from candles!” Lyn pointed to one of the windows beside her.

The duo had been climbing a spiral staircase for a while before ever reaching…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon cuz we can always defeat him and yeet him out of the castle XD

maybe he doesn’t own it, but he found it and was like “OH HEY FREE STRONGHOLD!! YA KNOW XD

@elishavet-pidyon

OOH I LOVE THIS IDEA where it’s actually like “his” castle kind, but like he’s using it as a stronghold and he hasn’t just “appeared there” so ye…that’s awesome cuz we kinda needed someone for the brothers to fight ROFL

@elishavet-pidyon poor Viktor XD

@koshka

ALRIGHTY SO LETS GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!!!

….SOMEHOW 🤣

Arabella & November

They’d been walking for a while, opening different doors only to reveal more hallways, or various rooms that didn’t seem to get them any closer to their destination: outside. November hoped the brothers weren’t getting…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

BONIFER SQUOON SHRIEK…..*throws stuff against the wall and throws tantrum!!!*

I. LOATHE. HIM.

I how can he be LESS NICE?!?! Bonfire squoon is a sick monster….

ahem….anyway….those books crushed my soul, ignore my rant.