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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Arabella
All eyes turned to focus on their group. Ara frowned at the attention and reached for November’s hand. She allowed a piece of her hair to fall over one eye, hoping to hide some of the stares.
Her anxieties had gotten better since their recent adventure with Lyn and Nyx, but the t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 you wanna go next?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I’m sorry y’all. For some reason I can’t seem to get anything written and sent in. Don’t wait for me if you can help it. I’ll try to jump back in as soon as possible.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.
Crosshair
“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.
Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h u on?
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter how bout y’all?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h gonna go ahead and RP my charries just watching it all XD so at least they’re doing SOMETHING 🤣
Jocelyn
“Yeah. So long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So, what’s your name?”
All of the men lowered their weapons, which made the twins a bit more at ease. But not Nyx.
Which, truth be…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon aww I love that moodboard! It feels really innocent and dreamy, like lying in a sunny meadow and imagining fairies in the flowers 🥰✨
@katthewriter OOH I really adore the color scheme and the lyrics, it looks so great 🤩
@dreedomwriter76 I already feel so bad for Leon even tho I don’t know much about his story D: Y’all are so…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
HEY YALL LONG TIME NO…POST?? Anyway…Ik it feels like FOREVER!! But why don’t we get this RP back up and running!! I’m real excited to interact with all the soldiers/charries!!!
It’s not really a good time for me to RP (as in my charries can’t really do much but watch the interaction…[Read more]
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Mary G started the topic How Many is too many Character!?!?!?! in the forum Characters 4 years ago
Hey! I hope everyone is having a great summer!
I have a quick question: Can you have too many character in a novel?
So I decided to do a Carrie count because in the last year there have been a lot of uninvited but intriguing character barging in on my WIP.
I have 34 named characters!! Is that too many. Not all of them are in the same chapters…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon Ok then! I’ll wait till you have something.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@Freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 Any of you want to go next?
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
*sniffs*
MY BABYYYYYYYYYYYYY…
I don’t think I’ll get tired of reading about him any time soon… 😉
1. Definitely! I thought the contrast between the visible and invisible blood on his hands was particularly powerful.
2. Yes. @elishavet-pidyon made a phenomenal point: the fact that Ryker believes his trembling is because of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Crosshair
One of the soldiers drew his pistol. “Give us one good reason why we should tell you our names.”
The other had his hand on his holster, ready to draw.
Next to one of them, a young woman stood, evidently trying not to attract Crosshair’s attention. The way she hung close to…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic Hey, Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Yes, I absolutely adore Chuck Black! From all the responses about him, I get the impression he’s popular around here 🙂 His Kingdom and Knights of Arrethrae series are sooooo amazing! I use his works as mentor texts because I love his writing voice and style. He really puts the feelings into every word, sentence, paragraph,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 All right then, here we go.
Crosshair
It was a little amusing, the way the fox thing was snarling at him like it wanted to bite his head off. Crosshair knew he could easily kick it into the wall before it even penetrated his armor.
“Hey!” one of the characters yelled, before also…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Sorry y’all.
Mikkel
Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.
Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?
Where was he?
movement caught his attention. Another…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon yes we are I believe
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I think @koshka or @elishavet-pidyon should go next
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
Everyone had stepped back when new new stranger had appeared.
Another one?!
How many people were in this place?!
Nyx seemed to agree.
”ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! MORE OF THEM?!” The fox’s ears were flicking and his eyes ticked back and forth between each person.
The one group had ex…[Read more]
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