@elishavet-pidyon
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Thanks. I might!
I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭
Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣
I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.
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Power replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
A thought on star light millions of light years away.
If you do a Bible search there are several verses that mention God stretching or bowing the heavens. (Isa 42:5, 45:12, 51:13, Jer 10:12, 2 Sam 22:10, Psalms 18:9)
Take a look at Strongs H5186. It’s pretty cool! 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.
is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
dang that’s dark
yeah, well that’s reality for ya.
It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.
Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
perhaps…
more like a knitted hat.
if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.
what do you think of Leon’s backstory?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Good section. The new prince’s beliefs make more sense now.
Yeah, he’s a character you almost feel bad for.
And we got to find out Leon’s backstory!!
I thought you’d like that.
Does him getting angry when Julian was all excited about him being the White Knight in the last book make sense now?
Did any of it surprise you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!
NEXT SECTION!
Extra long to make up for yesterday.
It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.
The guar…
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh no! Oops. Well, you can go with Beatrice. She is really bossy.
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I picked Beatrice because she wasn’t not wise in picking nail polish for her team…it was just for herself! That was pretty selfish. I wanted to pick Pawel for immunity…but he wasn’t one of the options. I chose Jayden next because he seemed kind and worked together with his team.
Oh! I didn’t get that part…okay, here are…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ahh!!! I loved the part when Buddy gave the frisbee back! I was cheering my boy all the way. And when the Sirens decided not to cheat. Pawel sounds like a great character. Kyomi is terrible! I wish I could vote her out.
Elimination: E
Immunity: 4
Challenge: Z!!! (This game is so much fun in real life)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
young-earth creationist.
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ah, this question.
I believe in a young earth, both scientifically and personally.
What is amazing to me is looking back at what we can figure out of how the Earth formed, and how that aligns with Scripture if you let Earth be young (Genesis 1 is shockingly scientific, so to speak).
(Plus, the Geologic record…there are some…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
no section today.
Super busy.
Sorry!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I may not be that active, but I can vote still.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 2 weeks ago
*mouth open in shock*
GIRL!!!!!
NO WAY!!!
That is AMAZING!!!!!!
I love it so much!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Noooooo. Don’t give up! I want to see it!
Ahhh! It’s tomorrow!! Where is it?!?!
That was so cute!!!
That’s super cool that you can do that!
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