Elishavet Elroi

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

Here is Keiden! What do you make of the man?

@hybridlore

Glad you like the chapters!

*withholds all answers to any and all questions*

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@hybridlore

but what if I did?

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@hybridlore

hmm. yeah, I suppose.

Did you see what Abby said at the end of the last chapter? Cracks me up every time I read the comment.

@hybridlore

Oh that. hehe.

Yeah, well he was a little bit over the edge.

Did you expect the boy to fight him, or to try and run away with him?

@hybridlore

what are you mad about now?

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Finishing at :20! I actually can’t believe I wrote for an hour after so long of a break! I guess I missed it, lol XD Got 1,340 words

Starting at :25 and aiming to go until :50! Gotta get some writing in.

@hybridlore

Haha. I wish.

Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.

@hybridlore

Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

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@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

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@jonas

Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.