Jaybird

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

No worries!! I totally understand. 🙂 I hope y’all have a good week!

@freedomwriter76

Ahh I LOVE it!!! Girl, it’s so good!!

Everyone’s already critiqued, and I don’t have anything to critique, so I’m just here to say Great job! 😀 I can’t wait to read more of it. Oh sweet, precious Riker!!!

And Erich…you better be kind to that sweetheart!!

Just one question: Who is Esther? I thought that she was Eva for a…[Read more]

@felicity

Jonathan… XD

@acancello

Oooh, ok! I’ll have my charries answer number 1.
What would you do if you found a $100 bill?
Ami: …

Ev: …

Finally,

Ev: What’s a dollar bill?

Ami: *shrugs* Maybe it’s a type of currency…

Me: One Aletheian drek is equal to two American dollars.

Ev: Oh, ok. So 100 dollars is 50 dreks! Sweet! After exchang…[Read more]

@felicity

Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂

I’m glad you enjoyed it!! There is of course more!! 😀 As of now, it is only existent in my head though… XD When I start writing, I’ll post it!

I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.

Yay!! &#x1f97…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassian

I am the #1 Wingfeather Saga hater. Anyone who disagrees with me will be mysteriously assassinated within the next couple of days (not on the weekends tho)

*horrified gasp* SAY WHAT NOW?!?!

*clears throat*

I have read your post about WFS when I stalked the forum and I can only  agree on bits of it. The first book…[Read more]

@mineralizewritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6

Here are the last three chapters!!! (Sorry it took me so long. I kept forgetting. XD) It’s pretty fast-paced, in my opinion. So don’t mind that. I may fix it in the second draft.

I do not have a chapter of Asher and Ev’s conversation. It may be in the secon…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes, it is his first name. And in most situations, no, it is not really acceptable, but Hans allows Erich to do it, whereas he won’t let Riker call him by his first name in almost all circumstances.

I think it being acceptable is more based off of the officer than the exact rules, if you understand what I mean. 😅

Ok, that makes s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @sarafini @felicity @mineralizedwritings @loopyli @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper

Sorry, y’all! I don’t think I can keep up with this RP as well. 🙁 Hope y’all have fun!! 😀

@freedomwriter76

Gotcha. You’re good! 😉

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh that’s fine! Lol, I’m sorry! I forgot to put a name XD. Ooh, I like that name. My nickname is Nat, you could call me that or Alina :).

It’s all good. 🙂

Alright! 👍

@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

I have to hop off now, but it was still fun doing a couple RPs!

@freedomwriter76

That was a great start to a book!! I really enjoyed it! Definitely intrigued!

Just a few nit-picky things though.

I noticed that Erich addressed his superior by his first name. (Or last. I’m not sure) Is he allowed to do that? Obviously, I don’t know, but you would, since you’ve researched. I was just wonde…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh that’s fine! Lol, I’m sorry! I forgot to put a name XD. Ooh, I like that name. My nickname is Nat, you could call me that or Alina :).

I’m washing the dishes rn, so I don’t think I’ll be able to do it today :(. By the time I’m finished it will probably be over.

Next Friday :).

@mineralizedwritings esther, @whalekeeper

y’all have fun! 🙂

@loopylin

Lol!

@euodia-vision

XDXD

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I watch Len’s every move. I will not let him ruin our explorations in the glorious depths of this library.

Behind us, a girl walks up, introducing herself as Elizabeth. I smile, waving slightly and introduce myself. “And this is Alina and Whalekeeper.”

( @lightoverdarkness I just looke…[Read more]

Sorry that took so long!

Oops, I didn’t see you had written a RP. 😅

@mineralizedwritings

Yep!!

I’m going to go ahead and write the first RP continuing where we left off while we wait for the others. I’m also gonna throw in a villain right now before things get too slow.

“So… y’all want explore this place?” I ask.

Everyone heartily agrees. I lead the way through the rows of bookshelves and down a staircase.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(I must tell you, girl…Will is an unashamed flirt. 😅🤣)

Oh boy. This will be interesting… Can’t wait to see how both Ev and Ami react! 😏😁😆

Amidala

One of the guys gave her a warm smile and wink. “Hey there…never thought we’d get such beautiful company in this place.”

“Will!” Another of them hissed, coming forward and grabb…[Read more]

@loopylin @theloonyone @felicity @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @euodia-vision

Another question for y’all’s charries!! (If I accidentally forgot to tag you, sorry. And if I tagged you and you aren’t participating, sorry, as well. XD 🙂 )

 
If you were stranded on an island, what ONE person would you want to be st…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Not sure if I’ll be able to RP today, but I’ll try. 🙂

@power @otherworldlyhistorian @sarafini @foltih-feolin @felicity @mineralizedwritings

Thanks for offering, though I’m not looking for beta-readers quite yet. 😉 Your enthusiasm is encouraging, though, and I’ll remember y’all when I’m searching for beta-readers. 🙂

@joy-calle

I watched Abbie Emmons’s video on beta readers and she recommend…

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