@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Making Bible Characters Relatable in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
I haven’t seen it, but I’ve heard of it from a very trusted source that is was fantabulous.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic They Came For Me in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, yeah! Thanks, that probably works better, and might help limit the reader to the protagonist’s view point. Anything else? 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic They Came For Me in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
Feel free to tag as you like! Sorry, I have a habit of forgetting half I meant to say till after I’v posted something!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic They Came For Me in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic They Came For Me in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
Mila was screaming. The ropes about my wrists bit when I tried to move, holding me helpless in the blackened snow. I twisted my head to find her, but all I could see was the boot of a marauder.
More screams. I had to do something!
I could do nothing.
Tears pricked at my eyelids, but crying wouldn’t help anything. I blinked them away.
“Take me,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Sorry, I forgot to tag you.
@godlyfantasy
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
So, I don’t personally know your characters, but from life, books, and from what they did in the Bible, here are some ideas to help get those creative juices flowing.
- Fear of darkness(not the dark)
- Fear of disillusionment
- Fear of the violent man
- Fear of failing
- Fear of not measuring up
- Fear of spiders (okay, maybe not)
- Fear of…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, those character struggles are very good. Your story line gives that pleasurable ache deep inside by which one knows it’s good.
Amen!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, yay! I love it too! It sounds SO good! Like a book I’d read till four in the morning and have to stop at random parts to soak up every implication. Is it off the story of David?
By the by, that’s a beautiful cover/photo.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Making Bible Characters Relatable in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, hi! This is so exciting! Anyway to make them relatable…
Have you ever noticed how personal the last verses in the Epistles are? They speak of Tituses and Demases like, wonder of wonders, they were real people. 😉 For example, II Timothy 4:13, Paul asked Timothy to bring him a cloak he left at Troas and some books and parchments. These New…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Topic suggestion for Biblical fiction writers in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 1 month ago
Hurrah! It’s on! Three cheers for the new forum, HURRAH, HURRAH, HURRAH! *Throws a ticker tape parade*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much! That’s one of my best so far.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
All these premisses are thrilling!
So… Here’s Nyx’s portrait. It was fun to make and I learned quite a bit about drawing fur in the process. I’m so excited with how it turned out!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What’s an unexpected place you got a story idea from? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 1 month ago
You should write a short story about it/in that setting, just ’cause it sounds so “readable”, if that makes sense. You know, the strange ground keeping people could be part of a spy ring or the guardians of a secret…. ok, my train of thought is on a detour. *Note lightbulb over head*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantsay12
thank you! This’ll be a welcome challenge.
@anatra23 I’ve read a few of the Redwall books, namely Redwall, Mossflower, The Bellmaker, and that one about the baggers where that lord fellow falls off a cliff 😉 . I haven’t read any in a while though.
Have you read Mistmantle? My brother liked them but didn’t get hooked, while we did.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey, @godlyfantasy12, would you mind if I drew Nyx? And if so, does he have any particular markings etc.?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Um, that’s amazing. Once again, did Nyx SPEAK?!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, nothing I wouldn’t mind reading myself, not to mention a ten year old at our church. Especially when I’m trying to make a very Christain point about the passing of mantles. No need the have my good be evil spoken of!
Ugh, yeah, it is so irritating when a word is placed in the wrong era. I mean, some words don’t matter,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you!
Yes, I have read GE, and it’s a favorite. S. D. Smith is the C. S. Lewis of rabbits!
Cracken and Bracken are brothers. For full explanation here are their character descriptions:
Cracken (more grey than brown. He is not a Meadow Squirrel, oh no, he is from the Wood of Cornish. Yes, he is. A friend to everyone except a few and…[Read more]
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