@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yes, they’re from my GE fan fic. The one about a cousin of the Jovesons.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
*Note* It ends before any romance enters the scene. 😉 XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Update
Ok, I read the rest of the book. Yes, I still love it.
Maybe he does like fan fiction. All I know is that his series is one of the few that have prompted me to write fan fiction. My twin sister and I wrote a sort of extra epilogue using what we consider foreshadowing in the books. We’re still revising it, but I’m fairly…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's an unexpected benefit you got from writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
My typing improved! Ok, that isn’t a nice, deep thinking one one, but it’s true. My spelling and typing have improved* immensely.
Also, writing is teaching me to harness* my imagination. Instead of rambling from character sketch to character sketch, I’m learning to brainstorm ideas and create storylines with meaning behind them.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Hi, I’m sorry I’m so late in responding. I saw your post fairly soon, but somehow haven’t replied. *Shrugs* (hard to explain, life is, well life.)
Anyway, your creature sounds pretty astounding. I personally love cats, sooo… (And don’t you love the word Humanoid? It’s not my usual type of word, but…)
And I like how you made a name…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Those are great, I especially like the first and last one. I second Lydia about Mejia.
Hmm. Did you like what you read of Archer’s Cup? I will admit it wasn’t my favorite, but it’s hard to not have a book of less quality in a series. And his books are SO good. They’ve done what only two other books have, and to a greater…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ok, make that ten feet.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Hi, everyone! It’s me again, and I have a question/whatsyoumaycallit. And yes, you can totally ignore this post if you want, I don’t want to hog anything.
Ok, so I know some of us have created animals for our books, whether they’re real, a bit imagined, or wildly different. (I’m one of those) So, I wanted to ask, what is your favorite critter of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's a book that hasn't aged well for you? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
I know, right? Una is a perfect example of a weak-yet-strong character. I can’t tell how many times I’ve imagined Walter coming back, I mean, wouldn’t it be a perfect story of healing for him to find beauty in life again?
A funny thing about “Goldie”. We have a cat who is Dr Jekyll-Mr Hyde all over again as well, so Jasper gets…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic dealing with overloads of stress :)) in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years ago
First, I’m sorry life’s crazy right now. And Covid can be hard to recover from, I know from experience. I don’t have amazing words of wisdom, but I’ll give what I can.
Make sure to take time for studying His Word and prayer. I know it can be hard, but everything usually goes better after time alone with God.
Get enough rest. I know, I know,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's a book that hasn't aged well for you? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
Oh no! What did I get myself into? 😉 Ok, Fort Apache is an old Western set in southwest Texas.
Our familyused to watch it and its sequel a lot.We kids liked it better than the sequel, because it had a funny scene with a group of children, while our mother liked the sequel better because it had a better plot, and sweet, thoughtful…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's a book that hasn't aged well for you? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
*rereads post, and finds I lied. Eeeeeps*
I was ALWAYS into history, (we were given history books to read as story books)it was just a few years ago that I got into historical accuracy.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's a book that hasn't aged well for you? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
Ok, let’s see…
The American Girl Stories: they were meant for a young audience, and I see them as such. I still like them, they’re just….
Little One, Maid of Israel: Biblical fiction taken flight. Sweet story, not satisfied with the ending.
But honestly, it’s been a while since I reread anything beyond classics like Northanger Abbey and The…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic INTERNAL ERROR 500 in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
Ok, so I was just kicked off the KP site maybe, five times? Around 4:20 Central Time repeatedly it did this, whenever I went to change forums, and twice trying to get in.
Every time it did this up came a page saying Internal Error 500 and to notify the managers of KP about when it happened and what I was doing.
So… this seems like the right…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thank you! 😀 He turned out so sweet.
@anatra23 Yeah, eyes can be hard to do. I think this was one of my best attempts at the “photo” look yet. For what it’s worth, there are bunches of step-by-step images online for eyes that I found transformed the way my sketches looked. That and copying detailed photographs.
Sorry I have taken so…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
Thank you. 🙂 (I’m afraid the inner essayist came out in that post) Yeah, I love classics, but we need more good books on the shelf than those written sixty+ years ago.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years ago
Why do I write? I’m not sure. I’ve actually pondered this many times; wondering if I need to be writing. Still, I haven’t been writing like this for long, so some things aren’t ironed out yet.
I started writing because I saw a lack of good, true (fun) books to be had. All the newer authors seemed to either be trailing off the deep end or leaving…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Hi, everyone! I like the Wingfeather Saga, although it is one of those books I have to find the lessons in or I can’t get out of it/enjoy it.
I also love the ending: the power behind it is mind blowing. There is no doubt in my mind that Janner comes back, (I mean, it’s fiction. The ending is as you like it. [Okay, I know that’s an annoying way to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic They Came For Me in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much! Yeah, I see. In my mind’s eye I see him standing there a moment perplexed while all the other Novak warriors chase the kids… But I didn’t make that very clear did I? 😉 I’ll work on that!
Thank you again!(and yeah, a lot of my ideas center around emotion)
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