Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

I think it’s either yours or @freedomwriter76 ‘s.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ok, so I think Yosí kinda gets “found” by the good searching group. Then they would head as a whole back to the others, having pilfered provisions from the storeroom he’s in(unless that feels too convenient/isn’t what y’all had in mind.). Other than wonderful conversations, I don’t have much of an idea. XD

@everyone

Let’s see….

Alwin

His voice hung in the air for a moment before vanishing beneath the noise of the crowd. Alwin frowned and began to search the room for someone who wasn’t occupied by food or friends, someone who would hear him over the din.

His gaze fell on a small, white face framed by a crown of red gold hair. Her mouth pinched…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That’s okay, don’t worry. I understand.

Considering I literally don’t know how many conversations on here I’ve dropped out of in the middle, (but I know it’s more than one) I had better understand. XD

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

So excited!!

Yosí

In the moment it took for Yosí to understand what was happening he had already found his cudgel and a place of defense beside the window. Instinct had moved his feet before he knew what he did.

Now all he could do was wait and watch unblinking. His eyes flicked from the latch to the window. C…[Read more]

@felicity

You do? O.O *feels warm and fuzzy* Unfortunately, no, I didn’t make it up. It’s actually Old English.

I like your greeting phrase too!

@everyone @godlyfantasy12

I think I’ll add Alwin too. 🙂

…and once more Alwin managed to fiddle with my narrative voice. XD

Alwin

Strange things have happened to people. They’ve found hidden treasures in their basements, lost heirs in disguise as traitors, and sometimes even themselves in places they hadn’t been. Some of us have even become…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wini is going to be, but I haven’t added her yet.  I’ll go ahead and do the real quick.

Winifrith

Her heart beat inside her ears, yet somehow managed to choke her as well. She pressed her back against the becurtained wall and let the fluttering folds fall over her. Hiding her away until she could think clearly.

Home was small.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That would be hilarious! I can see them now…

Vulka&Lynnieforever!!!! XD

Ah, just kidding.

By the way, I was told to tell you Koshka is thrilled. In fact, when you meet… somebody you might find her to be a lot like Lynn in personality. Also, it would be hilarious if Vulka married a shortie. (His father did.[which is where Z…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

This is pretty awesome. XD

1. Oldest OC

Um…………… Actually, I was going to say Cendrick, a main character from the first novel I set out to write (and made it to the third chapter.), But I just remembered one of the few vivid memories I have from my early early childhood. I was making a picture book during service at…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, yes. XD

Godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Ok, I’ll go ahead and write an introductory POV. I’m playing with a narrative voice, by the way…

Yosí

Gentle rain tapped against the shutters like the echoes of passing dreams, shut out from wakened lands. Their far off call swelled in Yosí’s heart till he rested his head against the s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy

Yay! That sounds good. They can meet him while getting food (maybe he has found some?) and he can come back with them to meet N and Paxton.

Also, I’m thinking that one of the kids might ask about the brand, because adults usually try to ignore such things. He wouldn’t really mind, but it would open up some details…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And yes, I’ve read through it. It’s so much fun!

Someday we might get together and publish it as “The Wild Wanderings of Our Lost Characters” or some other such title. I’m sure it’d be a best seller. XD

Actually, it’s been quite handy when on the off chance that I can’t quite get into the feel of my characters I can get on here…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! Yeah, I thought they might. They’re such darlings. (As for the brand… I’m not even sure what to think about it. It’s just so horrible really, but it’s just one of those things in my books that doesn’t want to lighten up.)

I love your characters and don’t mind a rant. (I rant about mine, after all. XD)

As for his name, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Oh, and I just wanted to say, I LOVE THE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN Y’ALL’S CHARRIES! Although, poor Grimm is getting a bit of a hard time. And the kids are so cute!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

*Emerges from the shadows*

Hi….. So…..

I know I kinda fell off this, but I’ve had a much needed break and now I want to join again.

You see, I have a new character. He’s pretty awesome, or so I gather from the little bit I understand of him; like I said, he’s very new.

Would you mind if he showed up and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wow, this looks like it could be a ton of fun. (I’m thinking this is like a mixture of camp, Bible College, and a birthday party, because… That’s what a sleepover basically is.)

Also, I’m really not comfortable with makeup etc. either, but fun hair styles and those heinous face masks would be really fun! I would love to see my…[Read more]

@joy-calle

Oops! I accidentally sent in a draft of that post. *Facepalm* I hope it wasn’t too rough.

Anyway, Your allegory sounds interesting! The end times are a bit difficult to write an allegory for anyway, with or without doctrinal differences, but it could make for a powerful read. My last book is technically over the end time harvest,…[Read more]

@joy-calle

That is funny! Your allegory sounds interesting though, and I get what you mean about theological niches. I struggle with the balance of doctrine and relatability myself, especially since my convictions on the Bible aren’t mainstream Christain. I’m an Apostolic Pentecostal, and that means my

@esther-c

Oof. I also have difficulties with this. (I think every author does at some point.)

I’ll just echo @booksbyjayna and say keep writing and study the authors you want to emulate. I’ve seen it work and will definitely be personally implementing it as much as I can.

(After all, it’s another excuse to read Prince Caspian again…)