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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Music🎵
Onnendel likes flutes and strings. He would love most of Mozart’s work, but Beethoven’s… not so much. Has a soft spot for lutes, especially the catgut kind that sound like the personification of water droplets. Probably plays one as well as a harp. Would be fabulous on a viol. In fact, he may even get one in the canon. Would mostly…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
That works. XD
Also, currently writing emotional/random/philosophical poetry. We’ll see how well I switch gears into roleplaying.
Wilhelm
Politics. Why was it always politics?
“Ah. I think I see now.” Wilhelm rubbed his forehead. “Would you mind telling me what the itinerary is for tomorrow?”
He would have to prepare himself if…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 1 week, 6 days ago
And when you have to say goodbye,
You tilt her face up to the sky,
And point out castles in the air.
You shape a dream she’s one day share.
Yet she does not yet fit in them.
Her world is shadowed, dank, and dim.
So as nothing else will soothe her loss,
You take her place upon the cross.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
This is splendid. I like Remington.
I am thinking I visualized the scene a little differently for some reason, as if the boys were standing. This makes more sense. XD
Wilhelm
The offer, however curiously stated, of fencing could not be refused. Wilhelm paused and turned just enough to know Jasper was watching, and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Wilhelm
It took an inordinate amount of control to keep his face neutral. Did you and to come all this way just to find someone on your level? But there are so many just like you in this world.
“You must have arrived late.” Jasper indicated an empty chair not a foot away. “Dessert’s still on the table, if you want it.”
Wilhelm loo…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Hear, hear!
Wilhelm
Firstborn. That probably meant he had birthright privileges. Such trivial matters could not touch the gulf of rank between them, either widening or narrowing it. Wilhelm nodded politely but shrugged mentally.
At least “High Commander” sounded like an active role, unlike the lazybones titles some people used.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
REMINGTON. NOOOO. XD
Wilhelm
For a moment, he was too overcome with horror to do anything more than resist Remington’s barbaric friendliness. If Wilhelm had been a cat, his tail would have dwarfed all former levels of panic, and his claws would be making inroads into the marble floor.
“Nein, nein, nein.” He hissed under his…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
*helpless dolphin noises* I love this.
Wilhelm
Remington. Lacreux. Lacough. Lacoo. Just Remington, Remington, Remington. Wilhelm nodded vaguely.
“Don’t worry.” Remington went on, beaming benevolence. “Just because you don’t know what a soufflé is, doesn’t mean you won’t be accepted by high society.”
A pause. Wilhelm trapped an…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Lolll. Very smooth, Marcel.
If Reúven hadn’t been already thinking in a serious line of thought, he’d probably have reacted much the same way. Just, not so unobtrusively. XD Marcel is awesome.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Thanks. 😁
Wilhelm
Was this boy a lunatic? Wilhelm tried to draw his dagger, deeply regretting that his more impressive weapons were in his room, but the stranger kept dragging him on too quickly for Wilhelm to coordinate his own movements. That might have been for the best, he remembered after a minute. Knifes usually escalated…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Ooo.
Reúven
His mouth went dry. He forced himself not to break eye contact, even though it meant she probably saw the flash of anger he tried so hard to repress. His smile was painfully thin.
“No.” Home was his safe place, guarded as it was by the man in the wheelchair. Anywhere else was a no man’s land of possibility. That was why…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Remington sounds fun. I am probably too tired to be doing this but here goes lol.
Wilhelm
“I…” He swallowed back whatever words were forming on his tongue. The stranger was an impressive figure, cheerful and domineering. His eyes almost glowed in their intense suavety. Wilhelm squared his shoulders. “Then what should I say?…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Tis ok! Life can be like that sometimes.
Reúven
“Safety procedures? Like drills?” He paused. “There have been some fire drills, I think.”
He almost went on to say that he always assumed those fell on days he was absent, but that was far too much information. It was always better to keep things simple. He kept the rest of his…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ah! Yes, poor thing.
I can bring him into the food area if I need to. I think he’s very lost at the moment.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My Book Feels Too Big (Also heeeey!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Elishavet- yup! It’s the first destined book! And it’s just like the first draft I’ve ever truly “finished” like there are still scenes needing to be added and stuff, but it’s mostly cohesive
Yayyyyyyy! *happy dances* 🎉 🎵 This is so exciting. I’ve wanted these books written ever since you shared their mood oards. XD
If you need br…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Match the Quote! Game of Books in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
1) I think this is from the Bible? I’m guessing the book of Ezekiel. It sounds Minor Prophety.
2) I have no idea.
3) This could be several people. Augh. I know the Captain from Tin-Tin says it, but as for anything more specific, I’m at a loss. It could also be Padra from the Mistmantle Chronicles.
4) Les Miserables?
5) It’s from Henry…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Portals: When My Story Ate Me. The serial story I’ve semi-periodically shared on here. I should work on HoA(Viktor’s story), but I have zero motivation for that one. They’re just sitting in a friend’s shop at the moment waiting for their parents to find them. Portals is a more manageable size, so little bites first.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I love collecting ideas from novels published between from the 1910s-50s. Mostly 40s and 50s. I keep notes from them in a notebook and I’ve done this for months; it’s a lot of fun. I often collect dialogue because there’s something very identifiable about fictional dialogue from that time.
Oh, I like this idea. That is epic. I’ve n…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Stopping at :59. I got 442 words in an hour. Not wonderful, not terrible. I think I like where this section is going.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
UFO (unfinished object) SPRINT
I’m working on Portals and/or contract stuff. It’s late here, so I won’t be on for long but thought I’d give myself some accountability.
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