@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
….and that was NOT one or two hours…and it’ll be a little longer till I get it in, but not as long as that was. 😂😬
Actually…
Yes! I’m at the Texas District Youth Camp. *Whoop*
It’s the last day though.
*Sniff*
But it’s been amazing!!!!!
(Hallelujah!)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes! I’m sorry it’s been a while. I’m at church camp, and haven’t had much time or energy left for the forum.
However, I’ll get something up in the next hour or two.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
*I sand in stupefied wonder at the door. Such an intriguing hall, such high stacks of locked chests hiding who knows what secrets…*
What gave you this idea!?
I have so many spoilers, most of them back-stories for charries. Like the reason behind Viktor’s best friend’s loathing of Dorwinian boots. Or which certain MCs will end…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Any Thoughts on this Scene? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, and thank you for sharing! It was good.
I’m often too hesitant to share any of my actual work, but I need to stop that. 😉
I hope your day continues to get better!
By the way, I totally get the whole tragic-story-makes-you-cry-even-though-you-wrote it thing. Especially when it’s based off a real event. I may have a few of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Any Thoughts on this Scene? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oof, that’s HARD! And well done wrenching out your reader’s heart strings. 😉
Your story sounds amazing, and from what I can tell from this clip, you’re writing over a time that is often ignored in YA historical fiction: the season of healing. Am I right?
By the way, if you are interested in the Jewish side of WWII, have you…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
@koshka (’cause I know this of all my WIPs is your favorite.) @joy-caroline @godlyfantasy12
I have made another random collage. This (submitted above) one is for Winifrith Aetheling, a MC from my Kingdom of Shadows series. I really liked how it turned out, especially since I didn’t envision something I’d hers being in that color scheme.
For…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes! It’s such fun.
You saw David?
Totally not jealous. (I say sarcastically, a small smile touching the corner of my mouth.)
We have been listening to the soundtrack/music for it as soon as it came out.😂
Thanks!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What do you love most about your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 5 months ago
I LOVE world building, and my characters are very dear to me. I can spend hours on the first, and the second have been introduced to my friends and family as acqaintances of highest regard.
However, what I like best about both of them, is how they contain bits and pieces of real stories. Even my WIP that would not at all be…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hey Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
First, my apologies for the belatedness of this response. Thankfully I haven’t forgotten that I didn’t reply yet, as has happened on occasion. (If I ever don’t reply to something for a looong time, that is probably exactly what happened.)
Medieval Fantasy has been quite the adventure to write! I don’t know if I’m good at it or…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hey Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Greetings, @freedomwriter76 and welcome to KP!
I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic(no magic) medieval fantasy. I also write poetry and children’s church material.
While I have never actually written historical fiction, I love to read it. One thing I like about the genre I do write is that I can work in as many random…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Viktor
Silence descended upon them, letting only thought move. Viktor fingered his sling and waited for the sound of heavy footsteps.
Rough leather between his fingers, smooth stones at his belt. He glanced at Alya. She clutched her torch and gave him something like a smile.
What would happen…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How to make a side character more interesting? in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Ah, good question. I’m far from an expert on this, but I have been in a similar situation with some characters.
His name was Reúven, my MCs closest friend who in some ways was like a mentor. He was also on the edge of being perfect and flat. He wasn’t really human.
So I stepped back and looked at his character. After a bit of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
So, I’m still working on my playlists, which is why I haven’t shared any songs yet.
But I really want to share some!!! So, here we are.
Oh, by the way, @Koshka and @lydia-s You have good taste. 😉 Sight and Sound is awesome! They’re one of the first I go to for bookish songs.
Also, I have had a hard time getting songs for my…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Yes, I do. Unfortunately, the extreme busyness that has kept me mostly off here for the past week continues. This why I am once more quite belated, despite having started (and nearly finished) a response multiple times.
However, here it one is! May it fill the needs it needs to.
Alyona
Dorwainian gaurds may be…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
I’m sorry I haven’t responded. We’ve been busy preparing for like, four different things coming up. Although I’ve started a reply twice, neither were finished.
So! Here goes.
Alyona
Thankfully, the lady took it. She looked much better off wrapped in thick wool.
Alyona knew what a sacrifice it was for her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know. I think they’re about to run into the other group just now, but after that, who knows?
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