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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s definitely been a while! A lot of things have conspired to keep me off KP. (Mainly College and Bible Quizzing) I’m still here though. How have you been?
Thank you, I await thy assessment in eagerness.
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @sunny421 @godlyfantasy12 @Idon’tknowwho @anyone
So I’ve finally managed to write the rough draft for the opening scene of book one of project Heirs of Ashes. I desperately need thoughts and critiques on it, and ideas for the plot. Really just anything will probably help.
For those who don’t know, HoA is an ad…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m dumbfounded. This story is getting heartwrenching. (Which is, I suppose the equivalent of saying, “good job!” XD)
I do find it interesting how you are contrasting two different alcoholics. It foreshadows trouble if Leon doesn’t find healing and repentance. •_•
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 4 weeks ago
Let’s see….
Trippin
Silence reigned over the shore. The waves boke with muted care upon the rocks, and the wind watched them flee away listlessly. Even the birds in the trees on the bluff above only dared to whisper. But then again, the best gossip is shared under one’s breath.
The best gossip, like a new addition of matchwood to the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 6 months, 4 weeks ago
Oh, he’s really fascinating! I enjoy how his backstory is intertwined with his present.
Does his scarring play a half symbolic role? For instance, I also have a character who bears intense burn scars from an incident when he was a child. (Although they’re on his hands, feet, and neck [the burns on his face were light and did not scar])…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 7 months ago
Hi! (I’m Elishavet [obviously] and I don’t remember if I’ve met or otherwise greeted you because my brain just will not let me, so welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! It’s an honor to meet you, hopefully for the first time.)
I adore how unique your world is, even as you employ tropes and tools used elsewhere. It’s obviously your creation, and I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 3 weeks ago
O.O
That was so horrid and so sweet. I feel sorry for all those characters. So many emotions….
BUT ISABEL IS ADORABLE AND HEART WRENCHING. War is never so dark as when its affect is seen in children. But it’s never so full of hope as when it’s seen through their eyes.
Also, the line where Leon wondered if she’d recognize him…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 3 weeks ago
WIPs!!! Huzzah!!
Thanks for tagging me, @freedomwriter76 ! I don’t know how much I’ll be on, considering this is the last half of the FALL 1 semester at the college I’m at, but I’ll certainly be interested in what is going on here.
Ah, yes, I think I’ll spy on this site and maybe join in from the shadows from time to time.
Also,
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Leon seeking Riker is much more powerful – even if he doesn’t succeed. He might not know where exactly to look, but Leon looking for Riker shows his heart. I like it.
Also, another thing I’ve been meaning to mention to you: I was reading an autobiography that made me think of you. It was by Benjamin Urshan, a minister born in…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Manyfelicitationsandjoyouswishes!
I’m so excited for you! That’s awesome! (And I echo another: you work at the rate of an “actual” author. XD)
*Flings confetti*
*Can’t remember your favorite cookie*
*Offers you a chocolate chip cookie*
*And ice cream*
*And a handful of raspberries* 😉
This is the first in a trilogy, right?
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
It’s definitely a spectrum. I the child who incurred questions from the garage sale lady on whether I was mute or not – I the girl who still struggles to speak loud enough for people to hear, I –
Am technically an extrovert. XD
Long life to horseradish! May its sparkles inhabit the sunlight forever.
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
’cause when we finally get squeezed out so you can get to know us, we explode everywhere with suppressed creative sauce.
Is Sebastian an introverted extrovert? Or an extroverted introvert? Or horseradish mustard?! (With glitter.)
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
Ooo, excerpts. Thank you for sharing! I like this Blair and Shannon. (Poetry, huzzah!)
I also relished the way you incorporated the poem he was reading into the opening. When the poem stopped and the dialogue began, it was like when the curtains on a stage are first pulled back.
I do agree that the descriptions were a little hard to get…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Wow. XD Hugo seems to have a habit of expressing himself too creatively for clarity. XD
Thanks for sharing! I shall now reference the poor ketchup bottle in vaguely shared humor at the first opportunity.
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Oh, in actual years, Tripkin and Dalton are more like seven years old… I think? They measure time differently, and can live an unnaturally long time(for real squirrels).
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Mine walk sometimes on their hind legs, but run on all fours. (If a squirrel runs. XD I’m not sure what the right word for ground flying is.) If anyone has read Mistmantle, they’re a lot like that. (very animal like, but also of course, able to do things real squirrels can’t.)
Tripkin is around twelve, come to think of it, and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Okay, here’s the entry. Y’all’s characters sound like such fun!
Because of my Squiggle Things small size, the normal/slightly choppy conditions write like Euroclydon. XD
Tripkin
“High side!” The words tore from his throat in two rough syllables. His dark furred friend flung himself up the tipping slope to join Tripkin.
Their raft evened out.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Dalton
Treeknife. It’s what he is and what he will be as far down the road as he can see. It was a Treeknife that found him as a tiny kit, and it was a Treeknife who raised him up to be the squirrel he is. Oakorn was everything – a father, a mentor, and a friend. Little does Dalton realize, he was everything to that old Treeknife in return: a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Elishavet Pidyon replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 9 months ago
Realistic is great! I like to stick to that route per usual. I am intrigued by these uniforms though; how are they powerful? in what ways? What do they look like?
Lol, yes!! I need a cloak too! My siblings and I always try to make medieval clothes but we have never succeeded.
Medieval clothing is beautimous. It’s very simple too (or at…[Read more]
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