Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76

THAT’S AWESOME!!!! Congratulations. I’m looking forward to (maybe someday?) reading it.

And of course we love your characters; they’re quite lovable. (other than the villains, of course, but then we like disliking them.)

@koshka@mineralizedwritings

YESSSSSS!!!!! I need something like this oh, so much.

I really like those challenge ideas too. (WFS! Maybe Green Ember, or even some of the classics like Pride and Prejudice.) We could even illustrate a verse! I mean, I get very vivid mental images for verses a lot, and drawing can be a form of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ahhhhh nice parents!!!!!

I’ve noticed this too, and it is a little disturbing. It’s not that we shouldn’t address abuse etc. in our writing – we should – but we need to be careful about what we portray as normal. The words we write are powerful.

Also, that note on character flaws is Soo true and pretty much a personal writing…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

I’ll go ahead and do one for now.

Yosí

His steps had wavered between the front of the group or the back. The adults didn’t give him any instructions, though he had watched them carefully. At last he settled beside November, alert if he was needed.

But he wasn’t quick enough when the time came.

Guilt pressed…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That is.. Amazing. I am seriously hooked. Thank you so much for sharing!

Well, I’m here. 😅

As opposed to the norm…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Thanks, y’all, for being so patient. I really don’t mind you going ahead with the RP. Even if I don’t have time to respond, reading through the things the group gets into always makes me smile.

Now, I can hop in with Yosí a little this evening, although I can’t be…[Read more]

@esther-c

Amen and praise the LORD!

But God, who is rich in mercy, for his great love wherewith he loved us, even when we were dead in sins, hath quickened us together with Christ, (by grace ye are saved;) and hath raised us up together, and made us sit together in heavenly places in Christ Jesus: 

Ephesians 2:4-6

He truly is amazing! Like…[Read more]

I’m kinda wanting to join this, but I’m too busy for right now. I will be stalking it though… It’s hilarious.

@joy-calle

I HAVE BEEN CURIOUS ABOUT THAT GUY. I give my approval. (Twenty-eight years late, but still…) 😉

And Diane!!! XD XD

@queen_of_alvastia

Wow! Tala is gorgeous! I’m not particularly a dog person, but she’s beautiful…

Now…

Yosí will completely freak out due to some exposure to war dogs, but who knows, maybe he needs to meet a nice dog. Personally, I can’t wait to meet her!

This is awesome! I’ll have to think about to figure it out though…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

YES! The Heirs of Ashes Forever!!! Reúven was probably the first character of mine that really just stole my heart right off the bat. Now Yosí is starting to.. XD

@joy-calle

but I do want to shout out @elishavet-pidyon ‘s Alwin and Win…

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@freedomwriter76

That’s okay. 🙂 We’ll miss them, but we’ll survive. *Sniff*

Although, villains? O.O

@queen_of_alvastia

Hi! Welcome to the little passage of insanity! There’s nowhere else in the Castle quite as… Um… Something. I’m sure there’s some great filament of uniqueness here.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I know I’ve said this before, but I love y’all ‘s charries. Grimm and Riker are both so sweet…

This side plot with Riker and his lost son makes me want to bring in Edria and Amicai, since they would sympathize soooo much (since they lost their first two kids). But they’ve been dead for nearing eleven years now,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter

Lo and behold, I hath ariveth! From whence I came I canna tell an to where I go tha na cratur canna…

Ok, I don’t know how the Florid Sword turned into Donal Grant, but the point is that I am here for the moment, and I offer my apologies for my absence.

(Note: HAVE ANY OF Y’ALL READ SIR GIBBIE BY GEORGE…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 It makes me so happy that you like him so much.

I would like to.

Yosí

They called the boy their Snowflake. It did fit his white hair and blueishly pale complexion, although it might have been given him for more reasons. Snowflakes were beautiful and precious, and they were never the same.

His large blue eyes…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Sorry y’all, I’ve been really busy lately. (There was a Quiz Tournament this weekend.) Things are also going to continue busy for… A long time. XD I should still be able to do one RP a day, but… We’ll see. As of right now, if I don’t RP just put Yosí wherever it’s convenient. 🙂

Also!! I think I might have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 THANK YOU. I feel that way about your writing, actually. You write a character’s mind SO WELL. 🙂

It was thrilling to write! XD

But NOVEMBER…. *gasps in worry*

Yep, Yosí is definitely going into “please let me help” mode now.

Fun fact, because of the way he watches out for the other captives, he has a little stash of m…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

These characters…. *Weeps*

… they’re awesome and they don’t even know it.

Yosí

The strategy was set; the battle growing near. Little pricks of madness were sparking in the back of Yosí’s mind as all else fell into focus.

This man, Yosí knew these men.

“November!” Grimm’s voice echoed through the passag…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

So I was close on Naja! (I thought she was around elevenish.[I just wasn’t sure, so I went with actions that were young, yet I sometimes do at my great and notable age. 😉 Which just goes to show how well I write ages.. [and why I love Children’s Ministries.].) I was wondering how old Jonathan was, though.

But…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! (screams a garbled mix of Bible verses, Hebrew, and elvish, because that’s what my day’s been like. XD)

But still. I AM FURIOUS.

HITCHENS us about to be tackled by several whirlwinds of characters. XD

Yosí

Safe? He gave a short laugh.

“Who knows, maybe I’ll die!” He grinned until he realized…[Read more]