Elishavet Elroi

Thank you so much! Yeah, I see. In my mind’s eye I see him standing there a moment perplexed while all the other Novak warriors chase the kids… But I didn’t make that very clear did I? 😉 I’ll work on that!
Thank you again!(and yeah, a lot of my ideas center around emotion)
@anatra23

I haven’t seen it, but I’ve heard of it from a very trusted source that is was fantabulous.

@trahia-the-minstrel

@koshka

Ok, yeah! Thanks, that probably works better, and might help limit the reader to the protagonist’s view point. Anything else? 🙂

Feel free to tag as you like! Sorry, I have a habit of forgetting half I meant to say till after I’v posted something!

@koshka, @anatra23, @power, @anyone

Because you might like to read it and help revise.

Sorry, I forgot to tag you.

@godlyfantasy

So, I don’t personally know your characters, but from life, books, and from what they did in the Bible, here are some ideas to help get those creative juices flowing.

• Fear of darkness(not the dark)
• Fear of disillusionment
• Fear of the violent man
• Fear of failing
• Fear of not measuring up
• Fear of spiders (okay, maybe not)
• Fear of…

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@godlyfantasy12

Oh, those character struggles are very good. Your story line gives that pleasurable ache deep inside by which one knows it’s good.

Amen!

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, yay! I love it too! It sounds SO good! Like a book I’d read till four in the morning and have to stop at random parts to soak up every implication. Is it off the story of David?

By the by, that’s a beautiful cover/photo.

Ok, hi! This is so exciting! Anyway to make them relatable…

Have you ever noticed how personal the last verses in the Epistles are? They speak of Tituses and Demases like, wonder of wonders, they were real people. 😉 For example, II Timothy 4:13, Paul asked Timothy to bring him a cloak he left at Troas and some books and parchments. These New…[Read more]

Hurrah! It’s on! Three cheers for the new forum, HURRAH, HURRAH, HURRAH! *Throws a ticker tape parade*

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Thank you so much! That’s one of my best so far.

Oops! I didn’t tag

@godlyfantasy12

@koshka

All these premisses are thrilling!

So… Here’s Nyx’s portrait. It was fun to make and I learned quite a bit about drawing fur in the process. I’m so excited with how it turned out!

@maryg3

You should write a short story about it/in that setting, just ’cause it sounds so “readable”, if that makes sense. You know, the strange ground keeping people could be part of a spy ring or the guardians of a secret…. ok, my train of thought is on a detour. *Note lightbulb over head*

@godlyfantsay12

thank you! This’ll be a welcome challenge.

@anatra23 I’ve read a few of the Redwall books, namely Redwall, Mossflower, The Bellmaker, and that one about the baggers where that lord fellow falls off a cliff 😉 . I haven’t read any in a while though.

Have you read Mistmantle? My brother liked them but didn’t get hooked, while we did.

Hey, @godlyfantasy12, would you mind if I drew Nyx? And if so, does he have any particular markings etc.?

Um, that’s amazing. Once again, did Nyx SPEAK?!

@godlyfantasy12

@trahia-the-minstrel

Yeah, nothing I wouldn’t mind reading myself, not to mention a ten year old at our church. Especially when I’m trying to make a very Christain point about the passing of mantles. No need the have my good be evil spoken of!

Ugh, yeah, it is so irritating when a word is placed in the wrong era. I mean, some words don’t matter,…[Read more]